4/25 homework

Good afternoon [이름]!

Our hometown will always have a special place in our heart. Thanks for writing this.

See you tomorrow!
~Teacher Shanee^^,

My hometown is a little countryside.

>>> Correct!
 I live until I was fifteen.

>>> I lived there until I was fifteen.
 It was a small apartment complex, and I went to the elementary school just beside of my home. 

>>> OR: It was a small apartment complex and beside it was the elementary school I attended.
 Near by my home, these was big river.

>>> Nearby my home, there as a big river.
 So, After school I went there with my friends and My family often walked in night. 

>>> So, after school I went there at night with my friends and families to walk.
 If there were big events such as world-cup, all member of hometown could see the match in the riverside with big screen.

>>> If there were big events like World Cup, all residents of the town could see them through the big screen on the riverside.
 Everyday the sky was clear.

>>> Every day, the sky was clear.
 During performing this homework, I recall my old story in my mind after long time.

>>> While completing this homework, my old memories of my hometown came back to me.
 I thought I want to go back to the time that I didn\'t have any concerns and fears.

>>> I felt I wanted to go back to the time when I didn\'t have any concerns and fears.