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I totally agree with that saying. In my whole life, there have been so many cases that I could feel that saying was exactly right. Once even though I had a strong will to do something, I couldn\'t make it because of my worse condition or I didn\'t know what to do and felt like I was lost even when I was feeling well. That was the moment that I realized the balance of my mind and body should be the most important one. That\'s why I try to sleep and eat well and not to push myself too much. Even to this day, this saying often reminds me to keep both my mind and body healthy. I wish everything goes well for you as well.
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I truly appreciate it, Elena! Please stay healthy both physically and mentally. -Faith-
I totally agree with that saying. >> CORRECT
In my whole life, there have been so many cases that I could feel that saying was exactly right.
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OR There were so many instances in my life where i could relate to this saying.
Once even though I had a strong will to do something, I couldn\'t make it because of my worse condition or I didn\'t know what to do and felt like I was lost even when I was feeling well.
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That was the moment that I realized the balance of my mind and body should be the most important one.
>> CORRECT
That\'s why I try to sleep and eat well and not to push myself too much.
>> CORRECT
OR That\'s why I try to sleep and eat well and not put pressure on myself.
Even to this day, this saying often reminds me to keep both my mind and body healthy.
>> CORRECT
I wish everything goes well for you as well.
>> CORRECT
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