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I can learn teamwork from playing sports.
Because if we have not teamwork, we can\'t gain the score.
While playing sports, we can learn physical activity.
Physical activity is good for our body.
Furthermore, we can increase endurance through sports.
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Happy Hump Day, [이름] [이름]!
Sports are very essential for every human life which keeps them fit and fine and physical strength. It has great importance in each stage of life. It also improves the personality of people. Sports keep our all organs alert and our hearts become stronger by regularly playing some kind of sports.
- Kristine ^^
I can learn teamwork from playing sports.
>> Playing sports can teach me about teamwork.
Because if we have not teamwork, we can\'t gain the score.
Because if we have not teamwork, we can\'t gain the score.
>> We can\'t succed if there\'s no teamwork.
While playing sports, we can learn physical activity.
While playing sports, we can learn physical activity.
>> We can acquire physical activity through playing sports.
Physical activity is good for our body.
Physical activity is good for our body.
>> Physical activity is good for our bodies.
Furthermore, we can increase endurance through sports.
Furthermore, we can increase endurance through sports.
>> Furthermore, playing sports can improve our endurance.
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