4/26 homework
학생이 쓴 원문
[Describe a place you will never forget]
When I was kids, my family used to go to a temple in the Chi-Ak mountain.
I can\'t remember a certain way to go there.
But, I remember the feeling, the mood of the moment, and some situation I did.
I often didn\'t want to go there because it was hard to climb to me.
My father and mother encouraged me.
My father dragged my younger sister and my mom carried my younger brother on her back.
So, I couldn\'t be playing the baby.
We did this climbing work almost every Sunday.
I don\'t know why I remember this situation.
Nowadays, there are so many smart items to care for baby and children.
But, I think the most impressive and memorable way for children is having time with them, despite parents\' busy life.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! ^ ^ Thank you so much for accomplishing your homework and for sharing your thoughts on this one. I really appreciate it! ^ ^
I remember also when my children were younger. During weekends, my husband would wake us up so early in the morning just to go trekking and mountain climbing. My kids hated it a lot because we walked far and it\'s so tiring for them. But looking at my children now, they are very disciplined with themselves, health conscious and are very smart. Now I realized that I guess we did something right when my kids were younger. ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah
When I was kids, my family used to go to a temple in the Chi-Ak mountain.
>>When I was a kid (when we were kids), my family used to go to a temple in Chi-Ak mountain.
I can\'t remember a certain way to go there.
I can\'t remember a certain way to go there.
>>I can\'t remember the exact way to go there.
But, I remember the feeling, the mood of the moment, and some situation I did.
But, I remember the feeling, the mood of the moment, and some situation I did.
>>But, I distinctly remember the feeling, the mood during that moment, and some situations I did.
I often didn\'t want to go there because it was hard to climb to me.
I often didn\'t want to go there because it was hard to climb to me.
>>I often didn\'t want to go there because it was hard for me to climb.
My father and mother encouraged me.
My father and mother encouraged me.
>>Correct
My father dragged my younger sister and my mom carried my younger brother on her back.
My father dragged my younger sister and my mom carried my younger brother on her back.
>>My father would hold my younger sister and my mom carried my younger brother on her back.
So, I couldn\'t be playing the baby.
So, I couldn\'t be playing the baby.
>>So, I couldn\'t be acting like a baby too.
We did this climbing work almost every Sunday.
We did this climbing work almost every Sunday.
>>Correct
I don\'t know why I remember this situation.
I don\'t know why I remember this situation.
>>Correct
Nowadays, there are so many smart items to care for baby and children.
Nowadays, there are so many smart items to care for baby and children.
>>Nowadays, there are so many smart items to care for babies and children.
But, I think the most impressive and memorable way for children is having time with them, despite parents\' busy life.
But, I think the most impressive and memorable way for children is having time with them, despite parents\' busy life.
>>But, I think the most impressive and memorable for children is their parents having time with them, despite their busy schedules..
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