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2016-04-28 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

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Aspirin (1)is used to lower fever, relieve pain, reduce inflammation, and thin the blood. Common conditions (2)treated with aspirin include headache, muscle and joint pain. Aspirin is believed to act against fever, pain, and inflammation by interfering (3)with the synthesis of specific prostaglandins in the body. (4)Because of its ability to inhibit the formation of blood clots, aspirin is also used in law doses to prevent heart attack and stroke and to control unstable angina. The drug's usefulness in preventing certain cancers, the dangerous high blood pressure (5)that sometimes occurs during pregnancy and migraine headaches is also under investigation. I read the article you sent me. I hear the first time about that....or I would not remember that although I've heard before because I'm not interested in. The nonsense articles are often served in Korea. I think it's a cleverly disguised promotional articles for injections. There are even cases journalists write an article under money. I think that the article about such a injection is a sales gimmick in a word.

강사 첨삭

Hello there SIR [이름]!

It\'s been a while since you sent me an accomplished homework.

Thank you so much for making this despite your busy schedule.

Well, as usual, you did great again. You were able to get all the correct answers.

Also, I appreciate your effort for checking the article I was talking about.

Maybe you\'re right. Maybe the reason why they wrote such article is just to attract attention.

Anyway, see you tomorrow.

~Teacher Shanee

Aspirin (1)is used to lower fever, relieve pain, reduce inflammation, and thin the blood.

>>> Correct!

Common conditions (2)treated with aspirin include headache, muscle and joint pain.

>>> Correct!

Aspirin is believed to act against fever, pain, and inflammation by interfering (3)with the synthesis of specific prostaglandins in the body.

>>> Correct!

(4)Because of its ability to inhibit the formation of blood clots, aspirin is also used in law doses to prevent heart attack and stroke and to control unstable angina.

>>> Correct!

The drug\'s usefulness in preventing certain cancers, the dangerous high blood pressure (5)that sometimes occurs during pregnancy and migraine headaches is also under investigation.

>>> Correct!

I read the article you sent me.
I hear the first time about that....or I would not remember that although I\'ve heard before because I\'m not interested in.

>>> It\'s either I heard about that for the first time or I heard about that before but forgot because it didn\'t interest me.

The nonsense articles are often served in Korea.

>>> OR: Nonsense articles are often written in Korea.
I think it\'s a cleverly disguised promotional articles for injections.
There are even cases journalists write an article under money.

>>> There are even cases where journalists write untrue articles for money.
I think that the article about such a injection is a sales gimmick in a word.

>>> I think that the article about such an injection is just a sales gimmick.

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