4.27 homework!

A happy weekend to you, Ms. [이름]^^

I hope you will have a goo weekend.

Thank you for sending this.

This help you with your sentence construction.

Please check my correction.

(homework)
I would like to know your expectations in this class. Please include the reason why you want to study English. Try to write some of your strengths and weaknesses that may help or hinder you in speaking English fluently. :)

(answer)
My name is [Name].

>> Correct

or

>> I am [Name] Kim.

I am 38 years old and I merried 4years ago.

>>  I am 38 years old and I married 4 years ago.

or

>> I have been married for 4 years.

And I have a baby. Also my baby is son, 7 month old.

>> I have a son who is 7 months old.

or

>>> I have a 7 months old son.

And I have a few jobs which is marketer, flowerist, painter.

>> I do a few job as a marketer, flouriest and a painter.

The reason I study english that will take my exhibitions after 3 years in spain and U.S..

>> The reason I have to study English is because of my exhibition in Spain and the US three years from now.

or

>> I have to study English because after three years, I have an exhibition in Spain and the US.

So If I have interview or about meeting with people, I will need to speak English. 

>> Correct

 Because I am a housewife, I have a free time.

>>  Correct

or

>> I have a lot of free time because I am a housewife. 

But suddenly if my baby is crying, I can\'t studying English. Because I have to take good care of my baby.

>> But sometimes when my baby cry, I can\'t study English. I also have to take care of my baby.

Nice to meet you, teacher. Thank you for sir, I look forward to working many teaching.

>> Nice meeting you, I look forward for your teaching.