4/27 homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Citizens must follow mandatory quarantine and if they harshly disobey it should be punished legally.
They have to know that they are exposing themselves as well as others to the virus in order to defend their unclear right.
We should think about freedom again in the era.
The government may not be able to confine them by force, but they may be legally fined or imprisoned.
Freedom is doing what I want without infringing or hurting others.
However, I understand that if the government just requires mandatory quarantine to the public without any examination it is quite uncomfortable.
I heard that many suspected cases are still waiting examined and treatment system for confirmed cases is also still incomplete.
Therefore, both government and the public should make an effort together.
People have to follow the government\'s decision and the government has to frequently and honestly inform their actions and plans.
And we should know that the final goal of all is the fight against viruses.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름],
This is a great response to the homework you were given. You used the correct words and constructed complex sentences, so I am really glad. Keep it up!
-Rachel
Citizens must follow mandatory quarantine and if they harshly disobey it should be punished legally.
>> correct (just change it with they- they should be punished legally)
They have to know that they are exposing themselves as well as others to the virus in order to defend their unclear right.
They have to know that they are exposing themselves as well as others to the virus in order to defend their unclear right.
>> correct
We should think about freedom again in the era.
We should think about freedom again in the era.
>> correct
The government may not be able to confine them by force, but they may be legally fined or imprisoned.
The government may not be able to confine them by force, but they may be legally fined or imprisoned.
>> correct
Freedom is doing what I want without infringing or hurting others.
Freedom is doing what I want without infringing or hurting others.
>> correct (awesome sentence)
However, I understand that if the government just requires mandatory quarantine to the public without any examination it is quite uncomfortable.
However, I understand that if the government just requires mandatory quarantine to the public without any examination it is quite uncomfortable.
>> correct
I heard that many suspected cases are still waiting examined and treatment system for confirmed cases is also still incomplete.
I heard that many suspected cases are still waiting examined and treatment system for confirmed cases is also still incomplete.
>> I heard that many suspected cases are still waiting to be examined and treated to be recognized as confirmed cases but it is still incomplete.
Therefore, both government and the public should make an effort together.
Therefore, both government and the public should make an effort together.
>> correct
People have to follow the government\'s decision and the government has to frequently and honestly inform their actions and plans.
People have to follow the government\'s decision and the government has to frequently and honestly inform their actions and plans.
>> correct
>> People have to follow government\'s ordinance and it should be transparent about its actions and plans.
And we should know that the final goal of all is the fight against viruses.
And we should know that the final goal of all is the fight against viruses.
>> correct
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