4.28 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi ma'am! Good afternoon!
Homework
Why is it common in your society to start a family at a later age.
These days, it is common to start a family at a late age in Korea. [이름] people are becoming difficult to start their marrage life. Because they are living in a high competition. They need lots of money to start a family and they need a shelter and good job,too. It is so difficult to start a family having all preparation.
So the number of DINK is increasing these days in Korea.
"DINK" means Double Income No Kids.
Thank you!
강사 첨삭
Hello Mr. [이름]! Thank you fo answering the essay today. Now, I totally understand why Koreans marry at a late age. I guess they just want to have a stable married life that is why they secure everything first before getting married. Anyway, enjoy your day.
~KELLY~
Hi ma\'am! Good afternoon!>> Correct.HomeworkWhy is it common in your society to start a family at a later age.These days, it is common to start a family at a late age in Korea.
>> Correct.
[이름] people are becoming difficult to start their marrage life.
>> [이름] people are having a difficulty to start their marrage life.
Because they are living in a high competition.
>> Because they live in a society where competition is really high.
They need lots of money to start a family and they need a shelter and good job,too.
>> They need lots of money to start a family and they need a shelter and a good job,too.
It is so difficult to start a family having all preparation.
>> It is so difficult to start a family with all those things that they need to prepare.So the number of DINK is increasing these days in Korea.
>> Correct.\"DINK\" means Double Income No Kids.
>> Correct.Thank you!
>> Correct.
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