4.28 Homework

2014-04-28 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi ma'am! Good afternoon! Homework Why is it common in your society to start a family at a later age. These days, it is common to start a family at a late age in Korea. [이름] people are becoming difficult to start their marrage life. Because they are living in a high competition. They need lots of money to start a family and they need a shelter and good job,too. It is so difficult to start a family having all preparation. So the number of DINK is increasing these days in Korea. "DINK" means Double Income No Kids. Thank you!

강사 첨삭

Hello Mr. [이름]! Thank you fo answering the essay today. Now, I totally understand why Koreans marry at a late age. I guess they just want to have a stable married life that is why they secure everything first before getting married. Anyway, enjoy your day. ~KELLY~ Hi ma\'am! Good afternoon!>> Correct.HomeworkWhy is it common in your society to start a family at a later age.These days, it is common to start a family at a late age in Korea. >> Correct. [이름] people are becoming difficult to start their marrage life. >> [이름] people are having a difficulty to start their marrage life. Because they are living in a high competition. >> Because they live in a society where competition is really high. They need lots of money to start a family and they need a shelter and good job,too. >> They need lots of money to start a family and they need a shelter and a good job,too. It is so difficult to start a family having all preparation. >> It is so difficult to start a family with all those things that they need to prepare.So the number of DINK is increasing these days in Korea. >> Correct.\"DINK\" means Double Income No Kids. >> Correct.Thank you! >> Correct.

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