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학생이 쓴 원문
Yes, we need to have friends. Because friends keep us mentally and physically strong and improve the quality of our lives. Besides in spending time with friends, we fill up with our lives with great conversation, heartfelt caring and support, laugh out loud fun. They are truly essential in our lives.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]. Thank you for this. I completely agree. Like the famous saying \"no man is an island\", we definitely cannot live alone. We need other people like friends to make life more meaningful.
- T. Beth
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Yes, we need to have friends. >>> correct
Because friends keep us mentally and physically strong and improve the quality of our lives.
>>> correct
Besides in spending time with friends, we fill up with our lives with great conversation, heartfelt caring and support, laugh out loud fun.
>>> Besides spending time with friends, we fill up our lives with great conversation, heartfelt caring and support, and laughing out loud for fun.
They are truly essential in our lives.
>>> correct
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