4.29 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi Ma'am ! Good morning!
I am going to have a domestic business trip until tomorrow. so I won't be in class tomorrow. I postponed already.
Homework
How do you think your country will change in the future?
I think Korean is a great nation. We achieved many surprising development in a short period of time. but there are so many side effects such as corruption,ignoring basic rule,egoism,etc. I think we can overcome these problems completely. So Korea will become the greatest country all over the world in the near future.
Thank you! See you the first day of May.
강사 첨삭
Hello Mr. [이름]! Thank you for informing me regarding your class tomorrow. Take care on your business trip. I will see you again on May 1st. Anyway, I agree with you that Korea is a great nation. I really hope that your country will also continue to develop in the years to come. Have a great day!
~KELLY~
Hi Ma\'am ! Good morning!
>> Correct.I am going to have a domestic business trip until tomorrow.
>> I am on a domestic business trip until tomorrow.
>> I am going to have a domestic business trip tomorrow.
so I won\'t be in class tomorrow. I postponed already.>> Correct.HomeworkHow do you think your country will change in the future?I think Korean is a great nation.
>> I think Korea is a great nation.
We achieved many surprising development in a short period of time.
>> Correct.
but there are so many side effects such as corruption,ignoring basic rule,egoism,etc.
>> But there are a lot of downside such as corruption, disobedience, egoism, etc.
I think we can overcome these problems completely.
>> Correct.
So Korea will become the greatest country all over the world in the near future.>> Correct.Thank you!
>> Correct.
See you the first day of May.
>> See you on the first day of May.
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