4/29 homework

2020-04-29 · 첨삭 강사 Rachel

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I believe that the cost is usually proportional to quality. Always a better quality item is expensive than the lower-quality item. Although sometimes it cost an arm and a leg excessively compare to the quality, the better products aren\'t cheaper. At that time, we bought a little later when it became cheaper, but it is out of the top of the line at that time. The best way to buy a top item of the line cheaply is to buy it after the season. For example, we can buy a high-quality jumper in summer. In fact, there are many factors in the cost, especially the fashion industry. So, sellers want to reduce inventory even at a lower price. They sometimes discount up to 90%. Ironically, some things give us confidence and faith from their expensive cost. It makes me feel like I\'m a great person. It\'s like different attitudes and moods when we have casual food in the street and have dinner at expensive restaurants. Sometimes I think that price is a number of the value in my mind.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름],
Thanks for diligently doing your homework. Most of the sentences are awesomely constructed, so keep it up!
-Rachel
I believe that the cost is usually proportional to quality.
>> correct
Always a better quality item is expensive than the lower-quality item.
>> correct
>> A better quality item is always more expensive than an item of lower quality. 
Although sometimes it cost an arm and a leg excessively compare to the quality, the better products aren\'t cheaper.
>> correct 
>> Although it cost an arm and a leg compared to the quality, the better products aren\'t cheaper.  (we remove excessively after arm and a leg because that expression already means extremely expensive)
At that time, we bought a little later when it became cheaper, but it is out of the top of the line at that time.
>> correct (just remove at that time at the end of the sentence because it is repeated)
The best way to buy a top item of the line cheaply is to buy it after the season.
>> correct
For example, we can buy a high-quality jumper in summer.
>> correct
In fact, there are many factors in the cost, especially the fashion industry. 
So, sellers want to reduce inventory even at a lower price.
>> correct
They sometimes discount up to 90%.
>> They sometimes give a discount of up to 90%.
Ironically, some things give us confidence and faith from their expensive cost.
It makes me feel like I\'m a great person.
>> correct
It\'s like different attitudes and moods when we have casual food in the street and have dinner at expensive restaurants.
Sometimes I think that price is a number of the value in my mind.
>> correct 

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