4-2nd Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]! ^_^
Thanks for doing your homework even if you are not feeling well today.
I agree that deception is not a good thing in the long run.
While it is true that it is helpful in establishing good relationships, it is still better to be honest.
You\'re right when you said, a lie leads to another lie.
That\'s why it\'s difficult to escape it. In addition to that, it is also addictive.
So it\'s best to avoid it.
Anyhow, that\'s my point-of-view in this matter.
I hope you\'re doing great.
See you on Thursday.
~Teacher C[이름] :)
Deception is basically wrong, it\'s because it is to lie to someone.
>> Deception is basically wrong. It\'s because it is lying to someone.
There is always an exception in this world, and deception is also not an exception.
>> [Do you mean]: There is always an exception in this world but deception is not an exception.
Deception would make it easier for people to get along in the first time.
>> Deception would make it easier for people to get along (with each other) for the first time.
But I think deception would stop after carrying out its role that is to make it easier for people to get along.
>> But I think deception should stop after carrying out its role to make it easier for people to get along.
Deception would be a useful thing to relief the stress between others and me.
>> Deception would be a useful thing to relieve the stress between others and me.
After disappearing the stress or hardness, at that time we may need honesty.
>> After the stress or difficulties have disappeared, we may need honesty.
In the start if you say deception to another, after time goes by, we have to say the true.
>> [Do you mean]: At the start, we can say a deception to another but as time goes by, we have to say the truth.
If you don\'t have a willingness to deceive others, you have to say it as possible as you can.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> If you don\'t have an intention to deceive others, you have to say it as much as you possibly can.
If you don\'t do that, there would be arisen an misunderstanding.
>> If you don\'t do that, there would be a misunderstanding.
If not, you never say the truth.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> If not, you are a liar.
Generally, many normal people could not endure that they deceived someone without reluctance.
>> Generally, many normal people could not endure being deceived by someone without reluctance.
It\'s because we have a good characteristics.
>> It\'s because we have good characteristics.
But a lie would make another, so we always consider it.
>> [Do you mean]: But a lie would make another lie, so we should always consider it.
If not, we would be a liar.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> If do not do it then we would be a liar.
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