4-2nd Homework

2017-04-11 · 첨삭 강사 Charry

학생이 쓴 원문

Deception is basically wrong, it's because it is to lie to someone. There is always an exception in this world, and deception is also not an exception. Deception would make it easier for people to get along in the first time. But I think deception would stop after carrying out its role that is to make it easier for people to get along. Deception would be a useful thing to relief the stress between others and me. After disappearing the stress or hardness, at that time we may need honesty. In the start if you say deception to another, after time goes by, we have to say the true. If you don't have a willingness to deceive others, you have to say it as possible as you can. If you don't do that, there would be arisen an misunderstanding. If not, you never say the truth. Generally, many normal people could not endure that they deceived someone without reluctance. It's because we have a good characteristics. But a lie would make another, so we always consider it. If not, we would be a liar.

강사 첨삭

Hello, [이름]! ^_^
Thanks for doing your homework even if you are not feeling well today.

I agree that deception is not a good thing in the long run.

While it is true that it is helpful in establishing good relationships, it is still better to be honest.

You\'re right when you said, a lie leads to another lie.

That\'s why it\'s difficult to escape it. In addition to that, it is also addictive.

So it\'s best to avoid it.

Anyhow, that\'s my point-of-view in this matter.

I hope you\'re doing great.

See you on Thursday.

~Teacher C[이름] :)

Deception is basically wrong, it\'s because it is to lie to someone.

>> Deception is basically wrong. It\'s because it is lying to someone.
There is always an exception in this world, and deception is also not an exception.

>> [Do you mean]: There is always an exception in this world but deception is not an exception.
Deception would make it easier for people to get along in the first time.

>> Deception would make it easier for people to get along (with each other) for the first time.
But I think deception would stop after carrying out its role that is to make it easier for people to get along.

>> But I think deception should stop after carrying out its role to make it easier for people to get along.
Deception would be a useful thing to relief the stress between others and me.

>> Deception would be a useful thing to relieve the stress between others and me.
After disappearing the stress or hardness, at that time we may need honesty.

>> After the stress or difficulties have disappeared, we may need honesty.
In the start if you say deception to another, after time goes by, we have to say the true.

>> [Do you mean]: At the start, we can say a deception to another but as time goes by, we have to say the truth.
If you don\'t have a willingness to deceive others, you have to say it as possible as you can.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> If you don\'t have an intention to deceive others, you have to say it as much as you possibly can.
If you don\'t do that, there would be arisen an misunderstanding.

>> If you don\'t do that, there would be a misunderstanding.
If not, you never say the truth.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> If not, you are a liar.
Generally, many normal people could not endure that they deceived someone without reluctance.

>> Generally, many normal people could not endure being deceived by someone without reluctance.
It\'s because we have a good characteristics.

>> It\'s because we have good characteristics.
But a lie would make another, so we always consider it.

>> [Do you mean]: But a lie would make another lie, so we should always consider it.
If not, we would be a liar.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> If do not do it then we would be a liar.

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