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2018-04-05 · 첨삭 강사 Brian

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Were you interested in art some years ago? and now? I graduated from art university. And I majored in fine art. I've been interested in drawing something since i was a child. Those days, I didn't know the exact art but i knew exactly that i feel really happy when i doing draw something. And then as in adolescence i prepared entrance art examination. Lamentably i was so absorbed in painting that i neglected my important studies. By the time i regretted it, i had lefe the university i had wished for. And i made up my mine to work hard at the university where i barely passed to prevent furthe regret. And i learned there about real art. Nude crockey, sculpture, engraving, installation art etc... It was very valuable college life to me. It is ridiculous, but i sometimes dream of going back to college.

강사 첨삭

Hi there [이름],

Thank you for doing your assignment
it\'s impressive that you are a fine arts major
Keep practicing and don\'t stop aiming High.


Teacher Brian,


Were you interested in art some years ago? and now?
Were you interested in art some years ago? and now?
I graduated from art university.

>>I graduated from in an art university
And I majored in fine art.

>>and I majored in fine arts
 I\'ve been interested in drawing something since i was a child.

>> I\'ve been interested in drawing things since I was a child.
Those days, I didn\'t know the exact art but i knew exactly that i feel really happy when i doing draw something.

>> at that time I don\'t what is the meaning of art but I feel really happy when I am drawing something.
 And then as in adolescence i prepared entrance art examination.

>> during my adolescence I prepared for the entrance art examination
Lamentably i was so absorbed in painting that i neglected my important studies.

>>  I was absorbed in arts school specifically painting that I neglected my studies.
By the time i regretted it, i had lefe the university i had wished for.

>> I regret it and I left the University
And i made up my mine to work hard at the university where i barely passed to prevent furthe regret.

>> I made up my mind to word hard at a new university where I barely pass in order for me to make things right.
And i learned there about real art. Nude crockey, sculpture, engraving, installation art etc...

>> and there were I learned the meaning of real art, nude crockey, sculpture , engraving, installation art and other more.
It was very valuable college life to me.

>> it was a valuable and unforgettable college experience for me
It is ridiculous, but i sometimes dream of going back to college.

>>It\'s ridiculous but sometimes I dream of going back to college.


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