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2023-04-03 · 첨삭 강사 Kristine

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Tourism is important in our country. Because, we are free from corona limitation. And I interest in alone tourism at the moment. I want to visit gangwon-do. Because. Gangwon-do local food is potato. It tastes fantastic.

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Thanks, [이름] [이름]!

Tourism offers great opportunities for emerging economies and developing countries. It creates jobs, strengthens the local economy, contributes to local infrastructure development and can help to conserve the natural environment and cultural assets and traditions, and to reduce poverty and inequality.

- Kristine ^^

Tourism is important in our country.

>> Our country\'s tourism is important.
Because, we are free from corona limitation.

>> Because, we are free from corona virus.
And I interest in alone tourism at the moment.

>> I\'m now interested in traveling alone.
I want to visit gangwon-do.

>> I\'d like to go to Gangwon-do.
Because. Gangwon-do local food is potato.

>> Because Gangwon-do\'s local food is potato.

It tastes fantastic.

>> Correct.

Or >> It\'s tasteful.

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