4.3 Homework

2014-04-03 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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Hi ma'am! Good morning! It is Thursday already. Time flies fast. Homework Does intelligence make people more attractive? In my childhood, the kids with good at studying could easily be forgiven even they did bad behavior. Though I became an adult,I like a person who have intelligence. That means intelligence make people more attractive. I agree with that. Thank you!

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Good morning Mr. [이름]! I also agree with you that intelligence makes a person more attractive. So stay as attractive as you are now. Have a good day! ~KELLY~ Hi ma\'am! Good morning! It is Thursday already. Time flies fast.>> Correct.HomeworkDoes intelligence make people more attractive?In my childhood, the kids with good at studying could easily be forgiven even they did bad behavior. >> In my childhood, the kids who are good at studying could easily be forgiven even if they did a bad behavior. Though I became an adult, I like a person who have intelligence. >> Now that I am already an adult, I still like a person who is intelligent. That means intelligence make people more attractive. I agree with that.>> Correct.Thank you! >> Correct.

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