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2018-05-01 · 첨삭 강사 Gray

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Q.You bought three houses with the One Million (백만) Dollars kkkk and you still have a lot of money ^^ what will you do wit the rest of the money you still have? kkkk First of all, thank you for asking me these happy questions!^^ If i have a lot of money, i would rather pursue my happiness than make a fortune. I would like to spend my money on learning various languages and cultures while traveling a broad for the rest of my life. Because ordinarily I think it is the most sad thing to have to give up what I want to do in order to make money.

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My pleasure Leon! ^^ I love offering a fun learning experience to my students! ^^ kkk

anyway, talk to you later [이름]! :D

If i have a lot of money, i would rather pursue my happiness than make a fortune.

>> CORRECT

I would like to spend my money on learning various languages and cultures while traveling a broad for the rest of my life.

>> CORRECT

Because ordinarily I think it is the most sad thing to have to give up what I want to do in order to make money.

>> Because normally, I think it is the most sad thing. That, I have to give up what I want to do in order to make money.

kkkkk I always want to have a Coffee shop or a club in Hongdae of my own kkkkk or maybe both for me. While I\'m travelling the world too! ^^

anway, yes you are correct. I also need to give up what I love to do to make a lot of money too!

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