4.30 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi there! Good evening!
I'll take some time off tomorrow. It's a May Day.
Do you think gardening is good for your health?
I think gardening is good for our health.
Generally, garden is located a sunny place. While gardening, we can get plenty of sunlight. we can get Vitamin D from the sun which helps us absorb calcium for healthier bones. I like gardening and I am going to move to another house with a beautiful garden next month.
Thank you!
강사 첨삭
Good morning MR. [이름]!
Thank you for doing your homework. Enjoy your holiday! Have fun with your family~
Take care!
~Kelly^^
Hi there! Good evening!
>> Correct.I\'ll take some time off tomorrow.
>> Correct.
It\'s a May Day.>> It\'s May Day.Do you think gardening is good for your health?I think gardening is good for our health.
>> Correct.Generally, garden is located a sunny place.
>> Generally, a garden is located in a sunny place.
While gardening, we can get plenty of sunlight.
>> Correct.
we can get Vitamin D from the sun which helps us absorb calcium for healthier bones.
>> Correct.
I like gardening and I am going to move to another house with a beautiful garden next month.
>> Correct.Thank you!
>> Correct.
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