4.30 Homework

2015-05-01 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi there! Good evening! I'll take some time off tomorrow. It's a May Day. Do you think gardening is good for your health? I think gardening is good for our health. Generally, garden is located a sunny place. While gardening, we can get plenty of sunlight. we can get Vitamin D from the sun which helps us absorb calcium for healthier bones. I like gardening and I am going to move to another house with a beautiful garden next month. Thank you!

강사 첨삭

Good morning MR. [이름]! Thank you for doing your homework. Enjoy your holiday! Have fun with your family~ Take care! ~Kelly^^ Hi there! Good evening! >> Correct.I\'ll take some time off tomorrow. >> Correct. It\'s a May Day.>> It\'s May Day.Do you think gardening is good for your health?I think gardening is good for our health. >> Correct.Generally, garden is located a sunny place. >> Generally, a garden is located in a sunny place.   While gardening, we can get plenty of sunlight. >> Correct. we can get Vitamin D from the sun which helps us absorb calcium for healthier bones. >> Correct. I like gardening and I am going to move to another house with a beautiful garden next month. >> Correct.Thank you! >> Correct.

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