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2018-04-30 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

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[a time when I faced a big challenge. How did I overcome it ?] Now, I am in the step for a big challenge that I never faced it. Nowadays, I am writing new style of journal paper. This is a perspective paper for my study field. I never write this style paper. I have to know the history of my filed and suppose future road. I feel this is difficult to me. But, after finish this perspective paper, I can upgrade on step by myself. Everyday, I keep telling my self 'I can do it, I can upgrade by myself'. I hope I will say to you I finished very well.

강사 첨삭

Hi there [이름]!

I am anticipating the day when you are going to share the good news to me.

You can do it!

~Teacher Shanee^^,


[a time when I faced a big challenge. How did I overcome it ?]

Now, I am in the step for a big challenge that I never faced it.

>>> Now, I am dealing with a big challenge I have never faced before.
 Nowadays, I am writing new style of journal paper. 

>>> Nowadays, I am writing a new style of journal paper.
 This is a perspective paper for my study field. 

>>> This is a perspective paper for my field of study.
 I never write this style paper. 

>>> I never wrote this style of paper.
 I have to know the history of my filed and suppose future road. 

>>> I have to know the history and the future of my field.
 I feel this is difficult to me. 

>>> I feel this is difficult for me.
 But, after finish this perspective paper, I can upgrade on step by myself. 

>>> But, after I finish this perspective paper, I can upgrade one step higher.
 Everyday, I keep telling my self \'I can do it, I can upgrade by myself\'.

>>> Every day, I keep telling myself \"I can do it and I can improve myself.\"
 I hope I will say to you I finished very well.

>>> I hope I will be able to say to you in the near future that I finished it very well.

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