4/30 homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi there [이름]!
I am anticipating the day when you are going to share the good news to me.
You can do it!
~Teacher Shanee^^,
[a time when I faced a big challenge. How did I overcome it ?]
Now, I am in the step for a big challenge that I never faced it.
>>> Now, I am dealing with a big challenge I have never faced before.
Nowadays, I am writing new style of journal paper.
>>> Nowadays, I am writing a new style of journal paper.
This is a perspective paper for my study field.
>>> This is a perspective paper for my field of study.
I never write this style paper.
>>> I never wrote this style of paper.
I have to know the history of my filed and suppose future road.
>>> I have to know the history and the future of my field.
I feel this is difficult to me.
>>> I feel this is difficult for me.
But, after finish this perspective paper, I can upgrade on step by myself.
>>> But, after I finish this perspective paper, I can upgrade one step higher.
Everyday, I keep telling my self \'I can do it, I can upgrade by myself\'.
>>> Every day, I keep telling myself \"I can do it and I can improve myself.\"
I hope I will say to you I finished very well.
>>> I hope I will be able to say to you in the near future that I finished it very well.
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