4. 30 Homework

2018-05-01 · 첨삭 강사 Blair

학생이 쓴 원문

Which secondary languages are worth studying today? Many people say Chinese is worth to learn because so many people use Chinese.(Chinese are the most populous in the world and it is growing fast.) But I think English is the most worth yet. Because English is an universal language and present world's powerful nation-USA uses English. I always think that if Korea is the most powerful country in the world, Korean may be an universal language. But it's just my thought so I should study English as a second language.

강사 첨삭

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Blair

Many people say Chinese is worth to learn because so many people use Chinese.(Chinese are the most populous in the world and it is growing fast.) But I think English is the most worth yet. Because English is an universal language and present world\'s powerful nation-USA uses English. I always think that if Korea is the most powerful country in the world, Korean may be an universal language. But it\'s just my thought so I should study English as a second language.

Many people say Chinese/Mandarin is the language that worth learning because so many people use Chinese. (Chinese are the most populated country in the world and it is growing rapidly). But I think English is the most worth yet because English is a universal language and presents world\'s powerful nation - USA. I always think that if Korea is the most powerful country in the world, then Korean may also be a universal language. Although it is just my thought, I should study English as a second language.

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