4/30 homework
학생이 쓴 원문
[What is your perception of beauty?]
My motor for life is \"To be a beautiful person\".
I think beauty is not only for appearance.
When I meet a person, if she has a smile and warm face look, she looks more beautiful.
He also too.
The objectivity for the outward appearance of beauty disappears soon, I do.
However, the indescribable beauty of words remains in the heart.
In Korea, there is a famous phrase \"The face presents the years of life after the 50s\".
It means that our face is changing according to the thinking or personality.
The negative person has a gruff look and cold atmosphere, but, the positive person has a smile and peaceful feeling.
So, I hope to be a really beautiful person in my old age.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! Thanks for your homework. I appreciate your thoughts on this one. Good job! ^ ^ Beauty is not all about appearance, it\'s more of the persons\' attitude.
-Teacher Jedah
My motor for life is \"To be a beautiful person\".
>>My motto in life is \"To be a beautiful person.\"
I think beauty is not only for appearance.
I think beauty is not only for appearance.
>>Correct
When I meet a person, if she has a smile and warm face look, she looks more beautiful.
When I meet a person, if she has a smile and warm face look, she looks more beautiful.
>>When I meet a person with a warm smile on her face, that person is already beautiful for me.
He also too.
He also too.
>>It is also the same with men.
The objectivity for the outward appearance of beauty disappears soon, I do.
The objectivity for the outward appearance of beauty disappears soon, I do.
>>The perception of outward beauty disappears.
However, the indescribable beauty of words remains in the heart.
However, the indescribable beauty of words remains in the heart.
>>Correct
In Korea, there is a famous phrase \"The face presents the years of life after the 50s\".
In Korea, there is a famous phrase \"The face presents the years of life after the 50s\".
>>Correct
It means that our face is changing according to the thinking or personality.
It means that our face is changing according to the thinking or personality.
>>That means our face changes appearance based on our thoughts and personality.
The negative person has a gruff look and cold atmosphere, but, the positive person has a smile and peaceful feeling.
The negative person has a gruff look and cold atmosphere, but, the positive person has a smile and peaceful feeling.
>>Correct
So, I hope to be a really beautiful person in my old age.
So, I hope to be a really beautiful person in my old age.
>>Correct
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