4-30th Homework

2017-07-07 · 첨삭 강사 Charry

학생이 쓴 원문

Actually, I like to make a trip abroad if I have a chance. However, it's difficult to get the chance since I have to work. Sometimes, I hope that I could get more days to take a vacation in series, especially, a month. I know that it is very difficult to be come true in real. Many Korean desire to get such a long vacation whenever the vacation season became. Even if we have a lot of vacations, we could not use it like a month. Nowadays, the process of getting the off-day become easy. We had to write down the reason on my document for taking a vacation. And a boss or a senior member asked me the reason of the vacation, even though it was mind. The boss might ask the reason but in the point of employee it was very embarrassing. Therefore, many workers in Korea might write down the reason that is not true. It is very ridiculous. Why the bosses want to know the reason that is the privacy. Even if they know it, there is nothing. The best thing in this case is to remain only the document.

강사 첨삭

Hello, [이름]! ^^

It\'s finally Friday!

I honestly think that with the busy schedule that you have at work, you truly deserve a vacation.

I find it weird why bosses or supervisors would sometimes ask why would you go on a vacation when it is clearly your right and you\'re justly entitled to it.

I sometimes wish I could also go on a long vacation and not think about work or anything else. kkk.

Anyhow, that is just my opinion.

I hope you\'re doing great.

See you again next week. :)
~Teacher C[이름]

Actually, I like to make a trip abroad if I have a chance.

>> CORRECT!

>> I actually want to go on a trip abroad if I have a chance.
 However, it\'s difficult to get the chance since I have to work.

>> CORRECT!

OR >>  However, because of my work, it\'s difficult to get the chance. 

Sometimes, I hope that I could get more days to take a vacation in series, especially, a month.

>> [Do you mean]: Sometimes, I hope that I could get more vacation days and maximize it to a month.
I know that it is very difficult to be come true in real.

>> I know that it is very difficult to turn it into a reality.

Many Korean desire to get such a long vacation whenever the vacation season became.

>> Many Koreans desire to get such a long vacation whenever the vacation season comes.
Even if we have a lot of vacations, we could not use it like a month.

>> Even if we have a lot of vacations, we could not use it for a month.
Nowadays, the process of getting the off-day become easy.

>> Nowadays, the process of getting a off-day has become easy.
We had to write down the reason on my document for taking a vacation.

>> We just have to write down the reason on a vacation slip when we want to take a vacation.
And a boss or a senior member asked me the reason of the vacation, even though it was mind.

>> The boss or a senior employee would ask me the reason for the vacation even though it is personal.
The boss might ask the reason but in the point of employee it was very embarrassing.

>> [Do you mean]: It\'s okay for boss to ask for the reason but in the point of view of an employee, it is very embarrassing.
Therefore, many workers in Korea might write down the reason that is not true.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> Therefore, many workers in Korea might write down a fake reason. 

It is very ridiculous.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> I find it ridiculous.
Why the bosses want to know the reason that is the privacy.

>> [Do you mean]: Why the bosses want to know the reason is a violation of privacy. 

Even if they know it, there is nothing.

>> [Do you mean]: Even if they know it, they have no business in it.

The best thing in this case is to remain only the document.

>> The best thing in this case is to only stick to the document. 

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