4-31th Homework

2017-07-07 · 첨삭 강사 Charry

학생이 쓴 원문

Co-working is a main concern if you work in the office with your colleagues. Nowadays, nobody works alone in the office even if the task is very small. In the office, there are many workers collaborating together. So, even if the task is not mind, we just have to know about the basic information of the task. I think this is a basic communication with colleagues. When we execute the jobs, we often face to a difficult thing that we could not solve alone. At that time, we need some help whose colleagues are working in the office. The best thing when we communicate with colleagues well is easy to relax on the vacation. In many case, we don't forget the job that we have worked in the office on the vacation. Sometime, we catch a call from the office at that time, it's very embarrassed. And after returning from the vacation, we have to keep working again from the time when I left. There is no executed things in the job since nobody knows my job. So, even if we leave the office, it's not true.

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]! :)
Thanks for taking the time to write today.

I know you\'re busy but you still make the time to accomplish your homework. :)

Anyhow, I agree that communication is the key in having a co-working relationship in the office.

An open communication removes the barriers and the prejudices we have at work.

I understand that this is easier said than done.

But doing it is quite worth it because it\'s a very good working strategy.

Anyhow, I hope you\'re doing great.

See you again next week. ^^

~Teacher C[이름]

Co-working is a main concern if you work in the office with your colleagues.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> Co-working is a primary concern if you work in the office with your colleagues.
Nowadays, nobody works alone in the office even if the task is very small.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> Nobody works alone in the office nowadays even if the task is very small.
In the office, there are many workers collaborating together.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> There are many workers collaborating together in the office.
So, even if the task is not mind, we just have to know about the basic information of the task.

>> So, even if the task is not difficult, we just have to know about the basic information of the task.
I think this is a basic communication with colleagues.

>> I think this basic information is that learning to communicate with our colleagues.
When we execute the jobs, we often face to a difficult thing that we could not solve alone.

>> When we execute the jobs, we often face difficult things that we could not solve alone.
At that time, we need some help whose colleagues are working in the office.

>> At that time, we need some help from our colleagues who are working in the office.
The best thing when we communicate with colleagues well is easy to relax on the vacation.

>> The best thing when we communicate with our colleagues well is that it is easy to relax when we are on vacation.
In many case, we don\'t forget the job that we have worked in the office on the vacation.

>> [Do you mean]: In many case, we don\'t forget the job that we are working on in the office while we are on vacation.
Sometime, we catch a call from the office at that time, it\'s very embarrassed.

>> Sometime, we receive a call from the office at that time and it\'s very embarrassing.
And after returning from the vacation, we have to keep working again from the time when I left.

>> And after returning from the vacation, we have to keep working again from the time we have left.
There is no executed things in the job since nobody knows my job.

>> [Do you mean]: Nothing is executed in the job since nobody knows my job.
So, even if we leave the office, it\'s not true.

>> [Do you mean]: So, even if we leave the office, it\'s not true that our colleagues will do it for us.

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