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2013-07-08 · 첨삭 강사 Isabel

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Hi there, My English teacher and my sister. Did you have a nice weekend? This is fourld homework already. Today is sadly sunday. But I'm happy because I can talk with you tomorrow. Weekend homework is writing a grammatically correct essay about my think. It was fun and difficult. Homework. My parents grew up the analog era. The times changed from analogue to digital. so they are not good at using of modern machinery. As well as, they have the conservative views about modern fashion. it take a family discord between the parents and thier's children.

강사 첨삭

Hello there my dear sister! :) My weekend was awesome. How about yours? :) Thank you for sending this in. And I really appreciate the fact that you consider me as your sister! :) Wow! I\'m really flattered. I\'ve got another sister! :) For your homework, you got nice ideas!^^ Keep it up! Enjoy making your homework again next time. Have a blessed day and take care my dear! :) Always, T. Isabel :) Hi there, My English teacher and my sister. >>Correct! Did you have a nice weekend? >>correct!This is fourld homework already. >>Here is my homework:^^Today is sadly sunday. >>Today is a sad Sunday.But I\'m happy because I can talk with you tomorrow. >>correct! Or>But I\'m happy because I can talk to you tomorrow.Weekend homework is writing a grammatically correct essay about my think. >>My homework for the weekend is to write a grammatically correct essay.It was fun and difficult.>>correct!Homework.My parents grew up the analog era. >>My parents grew up in the analogue era.The times changed from analogue to digital. >>Times have changed from middle ages to modern era.so they are not good at using of modern machinery. >>So, they are not good at using modern machineries.As well as, they have the conservative views about modern fashion. >>Also, they have conservative views about modern fashion. it take a family discord between the parents and thier\'s children. >>It becomes a family discord between the parents and their children.

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