4-32th Homework

Hello, [이름]!

I guess it\'s pretty warm and humid out there again.

Don\'t forget to drink lots of water.

By the way, thank you for writing an essay for today.

You\'ve created good and long sentences. :)

Working hard is important but we also need to learn how to take a rest.

There\'s a time for everything.

There\'s a time for work and a time to take a rest.

Many people nowadays do the extremes.

They are either too workaholic or too lazy.

Both are not good.

I guess we need to learn how to balance work and vacation.

Anyhow, I hope you\'re doing great at work.

See you again on Thursday. :)

~Teacher C[이름]

We live in the ear that we have to economically do something.

>> We live in the era where we have to economically do something.
When we start, we first consider the efficiency of the task that we carry out.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> When we start, we first need to consider the efficiency of the task that we want to carry out.
Even if it is not related with the company job, we reckon.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> We need to reckon even if it is not related with the company job.
In the personal job, the efficiency of the task seems to be important.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> In a personal job, the efficiency of performing a task seems to be of great significance.
Therefore, we don\'t have any affordable time.

>> [Do you mean]: Therefore, we can\'t afford to give more time.
So, we have a mind that we always have to finish something on time.

>> So, we think that we always have to finish something on time.
As a result, we live like a busy bee.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> As a result, we live a very busy life.
The bee seems not to have any relax time.

>> The bee does not seem to have any relaxation time.
Modern people who live in the internet era don\'t have a personal time and also they always are exposed to the internet.

>> Modern people who live in the internet era don\'t have a personal time and they also are always exposed to the internet.
So, we can get a lot of information even if it is not pertinent to them, like a garbage.

>> So, they can get a lot of information even if it is not pertinent to them; It\'s like getting tons of garbage.
The information like a garbage could mislead them.

>> The garbage information could mislead them.
Anyway, even if there are a lot of information that we can get it, sometimes we need to keep it away in order to relay our mind.

>> Anyway, even if there are a lot of information that we can get, we sometimes need to keep it away in order to relax our minds.
Modern people need a relax time, which they need a personal time without any hindrance.

>> [Do you mean]: Modern people need relaxation time. They need to have a personal time without any hindrance.
I also need the time for a long time, I mean one year.

>> I also need one year of relaxation time.