4-34th Homework

Hello there [이름]!

Thanks for taking the time to write an essay even if your right wrist is aching right now.

I sincerely hope your right wrist will get better soon.

Please do not strain it too much.

Anyhow, I\'ll see you again on Thursday.

Have a great day.

~Teacher C[이름] :)

Today, I want to say about the job disease.

>> Today, I want to talk about diseases that we could get at work.
The computer is a very useful tool to execute many tasks, and modern people use it everyday.

>> The computer is a very useful tool to execute many tasks and modern people use it everyday.
We can watch the movies and listen to the music through the computer.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> We can watch movies and listen to music through the computer.
For example, we could not work in the office if the power down.

>> For example, we could not work in the office if the power is down.
It\'s because we could not use the computer.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> This is because we could not use the computer.
All of the thing in the office is related with the computer connected to the internet.

>> All of the things in the office are related with the computer which is connected to the internet.
So, if we could not use the compute, we may go to home.

>> [Do you mean]: So, if we could not use the computer, it is impossible for us to go home early. 

Anyway, the computer is very useful for our.

>> Anyway, the computer is very useful for us.
But there are some side effects, for example, the wrest-ache, the turtle-neck, etc.

>> But there are some side effects; for example, wrist ache and neck pain.

Today, I went to the hospital in order to diagnosis my right wrest.

>> Today, I went to the hospital in order to get a diagnosis for my right wrist.
I have been a problem of my wrest for a month.

>> I have been having a problem with my wrest for a month now.
I think it would be cured promptly but it was more worsen.

>> I thought it would be/get cured promptly but it got worse.
I have to use the mouse in the office everyday.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> I need to use the mouse in the office everyday.
As a result, my wrest would not be cured.

>> As a result, my wrist did not get cured.
So, from today I will use the mouse on the left hand until it will be cured.

>> So, from today I will use the mouse using my left hand until my right hand is cured.
The problems that didn\'t exist have been arisen newly.

>> The problems that didn\'t exist in the past have arisen recently.