4-35th Homework

2017-07-24 · 첨삭 강사 Charry

학생이 쓴 원문

Today, the material of this composition is about the food in the world. Actually, I am not avid for the food so that I have a small appetite. Sometimes, I really eat so much if it is my favorite thing. I often recognize my eating style when I trip abroad. My wife and my kids want to have unique thing that could be not sought in my country. In my case, I first try to find the common points which are related with having had something in my hometown. So, I try to compare with the food ingredients. Basically, my favorite food is a vegetable but I'm not a vegetarian. I experienced the vegetarian food in the other country's airport. At that time, I was so hungry so that I bought the sandwich with considering for a long time. Sometimes, I have a difficulty of choosing. Anyway, I collected the vegetarian sandwich and it was terrible. It was very strange for me because it was not Korea. The ingredients was not unfamiliar with me but the taste was terrible. Korea's food have a lot of seasoning.

강사 첨삭

Hello there [이름]! 

Thank you for taking the time to write an essay even if you have a very busy schedule. 

I think we all have our own preferences when it comes to food.

I personally like balanced food. I want to have some meat and vegetables at the same time.

In this modern age, it\'s difficult to maintain a good and healthy diet.

They say that, \"you are what you eat\" and I think they are correct.

If you eat junk food all the time, you become unhealthy and obese.

But if you eat the right kind of food, you become healthy and strong.

Anyhow, I hope you\'re doing great.

I\'ll see you again tomorrow.

Take care always.

~Teacher C[이름] :)

Today, the material of this composition is about the food in the world.

>> Today, the content of this composition is about the food in the world.
Actually, I am not avid for the food so that I have a small appetite.

>> Actually, I am not an avid fan of food because I have a small appetite.
Sometimes, I really eat so much if it is my favorite thing.

>> Sometimes, I really eat so much if it is my favorite food.
I often recognize my eating style when I trip abroad.

>> I often recognize my eating style when I go on a trip abroad.
My wife and my kids want to have unique thing that could be not sought in my country.

>> My wife and my kids want to have unique food that could be not be sought in my country.
In my case, I first try to find the common points which are related with having had something in my hometown.

>> [Do you mean]: In my case, I first try to find the common food which can be found in my hometown.
So, I try to compare with the food ingredients.

>> So, I try to compare the food ingredients.
Basically, my favorite food is a vegetable but I\'m not a vegetarian.

>> Basically, my favorite food is vegetable but I\'m not a vegetarian.
I experienced the vegetarian food in the other country\'s airport.

>> I experienced the vegetarian food in another country\'s airport.
At that time, I was so hungry so that I bought the sandwich with considering for a long time.

>> At that time, I was so hungry so I bought a sandwich but it took me a long time to consider which to buy.
Sometimes, I have a difficulty of choosing.

>> Sometimes, I have (a) difficulty in choosing.
Anyway, I collected the vegetarian sandwich and it was terrible.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> Anyway, I took the vegetarian sandwich and it was terrible.
It was very strange for me because it was not Korea.

>> It was very strange for me because it was not a Korean food.
The ingredients was not unfamiliar with me but the taste was terrible.

>> The ingredients were not unfamiliar with me and the taste was terrible.
Korea\'s food have a lot of seasoning.

>> Korea\'s food have a lot of seasonings.



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