4-36th Homework

Hello there [이름]! ^_^

Thank you for once again writing on our composition board.    

I think it\'s really scorching hot in Korea nowadays.

It\'s good to know that you have a technique that helps you surpass or overcome the hot temperature.

Exercising helps us cool down because of the perspiration we produce during exercise.

Aside from that, it keeps us healthy by burning our fats and removing the toxins in our body.

Just don\'t overdo it and don\'t forget to drink plenty of water.

Anyhow, that\'s it for today.

I hope you\'re doing great at work.

See you again next week.

Take care.

~Teacher C[이름] :)

This summer\'s hot would be compatible with the last.

>> [Do you mean]: This summer\'s hot weather was like the last one.
I was not here in the hottest days because of my business trip.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> I was not here during the hottest days because I had a business trip.
So, I didn\'t know how hot it was.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> That\'s why I didn\'t know how hot it was.
I have a method to overcome it.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> I have a technique to overpower it.
It is just an exercise which is to ride a bicycle in the morning.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> That technique is a form of exercise which is riding a bicycle in the morning.
Riding the bicycle is very helpful to defeat the hot day.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> Riding the bicycle is very helpful in defeating the hot weather.
In summer, everybody wants to stay in the cool area having a cool thing.

>> In summer, everybody wants to stay in the cool area while having a cool food or drink.
But if you want to feel more cool, you would take an exercise like riding or swimming.

>> But if you want to feel more cool, you would do an exercise like riding or swimming.
 Actually, swimming is to do in the water, But if you swim hard, you would feel the hot.

>>  Actually, swimming is done in the water but if you swim hard, you would feel the heat.
Anyway, after exercising, you can feel more cool than when you don\'t do any.

>> Anyway, after exercising, you can feel cooler than when you didn\'t do any.
I think the morning is a very good time to exercise because the temperature is proper to do something.

>> I think morning is a very good time to exercise because the temperature is proper to do something.
Afternoon is very hot and midnight is dangerous since the distance of sight is very shot.

>> Afternoon is very hot and midnight is dangerous since the distance of sight is very short.
Powerlessness could invade you and it would affect to your life.

>> Powerlessness could invade you and it would affect your life.
So, I recommend someone. Let us exercise to endure the hot in the summer season.

>> So, I recommend someone to exercise to endure the hot temperature in the summer season.
It is effective.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> It is helpful.