4-37th Homework

Hi, [이름]! ^_^

It\'s another hot and humid day, isn\'t it?

How is your day going so far?

Thank you for writing an essay and doing your best to give good opinions and sentences.

I think most companies don\'t have the ideal working environment for their employees.

It\'s sad but it\'s true. 

No wonder many employees get sick after working for a long time in those companies.

I sincerely hope companies would put the safety of their employees first before their personal gains and interests.

Anyhow, this is just my opinion.

I hope you\'re doing okay at work.

See you again on Thursday. :)
~Teacher C[이름]   

A lot of workers in offices are seating on the chair to do their job in a whole working day.

>> A lot of workers in the offices are seating on the chair to do their job for the whole working day.
So, many workers would have a backache, in addition, they need more exercise.

>> So, many workers would have a backache and in addition, they need more exercise.
As you know that even if I don\'t say, their working environment could not be easily changed.

>> As you know, even if I don\'t say it, their working environment could not be easily changed.
In our company, it has a schedule to change old desks into the desk which workers can work in standing.

>> In our company, there is a schedule where workers should transfer to desks where they can work while standing.
Unfortunately, it is just the schedule, it\'s because of the money.

>> [Do you mean]: Unfortunately, the schedule is always delayed because of the money.
Even if the schedule would be delayed, it also is better than worker in the company which don\'t have any schedule for changing desks.

>> Even if the schedule would be delayed, it is still better than working in a company which doesn\'t have any schedule for changing desks.

In my office there are several persons to work with.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> In my office, we need to work with several people.
Someone wants to get the specific desk, but it is not easy.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> Someone wants to get a specific desk, but it is not easy to have it.
Previously said, there was not enough the money to change old ones into new ones at once, so we have to draw and the number of the desks is very small.

>> As previously said, there was not enough money to change all of the old tables at once, so we have to draw because the number of the desks is very small.

So the possibility for me to be taken is very rare.

>> [Do you mean]: So the possibility for me to have one is very rare.
Actually, I try to wait for being taken but I could not endure.

>> Actually, I tried to wait to have one but I could not endure it.
I bought the desk which it stacks on the old one.

>> [Do you mean]: I bought a desk to replace the old one.