4-38th Homework

2017-08-08 · 첨삭 강사 Charry

학생이 쓴 원문

The delay is always not good to everybody if they have to do it someday. I could not write the composition for several times. So, there are many composition that I have to fill. I have to write the composition someday, but I delayed them continuously. When I recognize it, many composition was left waiting my touch. Before leaving the composition as a blank, I always write down the composition after the class. Therefore, I always could check my composition after having a lunch. But sometimes I was busy and I forgot to write the composition. And when I found the black composition, I thought that it was just one so I could write promptly. So, I just delayed it. But the times of the delay was accumulated so that there were many blank compositions. There are several blank composition at the moment when I write this composition that I have to fill. I realize once more that the delay is not good. If you can do something right now, do it now. It is a good method for you not to get the stress.

강사 첨삭


Good afternoon [이름]!

It\'s really warm in my city today.

How\'s the weather out there?

Thank you for taking the time to write a composition.

You\'re right! Delaying things is not a very good habit.

This is because time is our most valuable commodity.

If you delay, you waste more of your time.

I hope you\'re doing great.

See  you on Thursday.

~Teacher C[이름]

The delay is always not good to everybody if they have to do it someday.

>> [Do you mean]: Delaying is not good especially if we need to the job/task someday.
I could not write the composition for several times.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> I could not write a composition plenty of times. 

So, there are many composition that I have to fill.

>> So, there are many compositions that I have to write.
I have to write the composition someday, but I delayed them continuously.

>> [Do you mean]: I had to write the compositions but I delayed them continuously/constantly.
When I recognize it, many composition was left waiting my touch.

>> When I recognized it, I realized that many of my compositions are waiting for my attention.
Before leaving the composition as a blank, I always write down the composition after the class.

>> [Do you mean]: I never left a composition page blank before. I always write a composition after (the) class.

Therefore, I always could check my composition after having a lunch.

>> Therefore, I could always check my composition after having lunch.
But sometimes I was busy and I forgot to write the composition.

>> But sometimes I was busy and I forgot to write a composition.
And when I found the black composition, I thought that it was just one so I could write promptly.

>> When I found the black composition, I thought that it was just one composition so I could write it later.
So, I just delayed it.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> That\'s why I only postponed it.
But the times of the delay was accumulated so that there were many blank compositions.

>> But I\'ve delayed too many times so the blank compositions just accumulated.
There are several blank composition at the moment when I write this composition that I have to fill.

>> There are several blank compositions that I have to fill when I wrote this composition.
I realize once more that the delay is not good.

>> I realized once more that delaying is not good.
If you can do something right now, do it now.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> If you are capable of doing something now, do it now.
It is a good method for you not to get the stress.

>> It is a good method for you not to get stressed. 

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