4
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello there!
A brilliant morning!
In making sentences , you need to be careful with your capitalization.
\"I\" should always be written in a capital form. Be careful also with the use of pronouns.
All in all, you were doing great! Keep it up:)
catch you later:)
~~T. Mona
HIs mother can\'t stop crying in sorrow.
>>Her mother can\'t stop crying in sorrow.
heaving her shoulders, she sobbed quite a while.
>>With shoulders heaving, she sobbed for quite a while.
Feeling sad for her mother, Jane also sobbed by her mother.
>>Feeling sad for her mother, Jane also sobbed.
Her mother who forced herself to calm down after a moment consoled her husband.
>>After a momnet, her mother forced herself to calm down and consoled her husband.
\"honey, I\'m sorry i made an unreasonable demand. Of course i kmow why you got sick.
>>\"Honey, I\'m sorry I made an unreasobanle demand. Of course, I know why ou got sick.\"
I was too depressed to control myself.
>>Correct!
Please forgive me.
>>Correct!I\'m sorry.
>>Correct!
Her husband kept quiet regarding what she said.
>>Her husband kept quite listening to what she was saying.
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.