4-39th Homework

Hello there [이름]! ^_^
Thanks for taking the time to write on our composition board again.

I think living in an apartment is quite great and convenient.

Personally speaking, I prefer to live in my own house and have my own yard.

This is because I enjoy the privacy.

In addition to that, I have dogs and plants.

I want my dogs to be comfortable and I want my plants to have a wide space to grow in.

Anyhow, this is just my opinion. :)
I hope you\'re doing great.

See you again tomorrow.

~Teacher C[이름]

Everybody wants to live in a calm and clean house.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> Everyone wants to have a quiet and clean house.
The house that I live now is an apartment, which is a normal living pattern in Korea.

>> The house that I live now is an apartment which is a normal living place in Korea.
In the developing stage, it was very faster than other countries.

>> In the developing stage, it was faster than other countries.
So many industries was dense in city, for example, Seoul or Busan.

>> So many industries were dense in a city like Seoul or Busan.
Many persons went to the city in order to get the job.

>> Many persons went to the city in order to get a job.

It\'s because there were so many job.

>> It\'s because there were so many jobs.
But those cities had not enough area to afford so many people who want to live in there.

>> [Do you mean]: But those cities do not have enough space to accommodate so many people who want to live there.
I think the apartment in Korea was the best solution to solve the problem.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> In my opinion, the apartment in Korea was the best solution to solve the problem.
If we compare the area with other dwelling site, the apartment\'s area would be needed less.

>> If we compare the area with other dwelling sites, the apartment\'s area would be lesser.
In a house only one family could live in there, actually.

>> In a house, only one family could actually live in there.
If the apartment was built in several layers, it could be taken in many families.

>> If the apartment was built in several layers, it could take in many families.
At that time, it was very expensive and effective.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> At that time, the strategy was very expensive but effective.
Now, it is also expensive and it has became a normal dwelling style.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> Now, it is still expensive but it has became a normal style of living.
Many people who had been growing up in a house but now live in the apartment move in the house.

>> Many people who grew up in a house but now live in the apartment choose to move back in a house.