4-3rd Homework

Hi, [이름]!

It\'s Monday again and I hope you\'re feeling better now. ^^

Thanks for once again writing in our composition board. 

I absolutely agree that motivation which is also known as inspiration keeps a person going.

A fully motivated person can absolutely do almost anything.

If the motivation is not that strong, then he or she will not succeed. 

But if the motivation is strong enough then that person will absolutely succeed.

Anyhow, this is my opinion in this matter.

I hope you\'re doing great. 

See you again tomorrow. 

~Teacher C[이름] :) 

Motivating is important to change something.

>> Motivation is important to change something.
It would be a good reason to do strictly.

>> It would be a good reason to be strict.
If we don\'t have some motivation to do something, we have to find some reason.

>> If we don\'t have some motivations to do something, we have to find some reasons.
That might be a goal or that might be a reason to do something.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> That reason might be your goal or a reason to do something.
If there is no motivation in our mind, maybe we are very boring in our life.

>> If there is no motivation in our mind, maybe we are very bored in our life.
Nobody wants to live in danger, but nobody wants to live in boring.

>> Nobody wants to live in danger, but nobody wants to live a boring life either.
If there aren\'t any stimulus in your life, you would very fast get old without any consciousness.

>> [Do you mean]: If there aren\'t any stimulus in your life, you would get old very fast without knowing it.
Motivation or stimulus is to motivate you in order to do some new things.

>> Motivation or stimulus motivate you in order to do some new things.
In Korea, the one thing that many parents say to their children who go to school is to study hard in order to get a good job.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> In Korea, the greatest thing that many parents say to their children who go to school is to study hard in order to get a good job.
It don\'t make it sense.

>> It doesn\'t make sense.
But it may become a stimulus to them, and they would take a chance to think about their future through a current situation of Korea society.

>> But it may become a stimulus to them, and they would take a chance to think about their future through a current situation in the Korean society.
Anyway, to do something to others or me, the stimulus and motivations are very effective tools.

>> Anyway, to do something to others or to me, the stimulus and motivations are very effective tools.
If they seriously understand it, there is no more advice, I think.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> If they seriously understand it, I think an advice is not necessary anymore.