4.4 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
What are the disadvantages of eating out?
If we eat out often, we spend a lot of money and eat a lot, so we gain weight.
And it\'s annoying too.
강사 첨삭
It is true that foods at restaurants are delicious, but expensive. However, I believe that you can manage it, Toress. Enjoy your dinner later!-Faith-
What are the disadvantages of eating out?
>> CORRECTIf we eat out often, we spend a lot of money and eat a lot, so we gain weight.
>> If we eat out often, we spend a lot of money, and we gain weight.
And it\'s annoying too.
And it\'s annoying too.
>> Also, it is annoying.
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