4.4 homework

2023-04-04 · 첨삭 강사 Hanna

학생이 쓴 원문

It is not good for animals in circus. Because they are not crown, they are just animals. They have to play in national. Circus is a human play, not animal. A lot of unethical things happen to here. Compulsory pregnancy, abuse, etc, all the bad things is happening here. So I don’t like to see animals in circus.

강사 첨삭

Thank you for your homework, Ye [이름]!

Practice more and you\'ll be great in English!

-Hanna ^^

It is not good for animals in circus.

>>It is not good for animals to be in a circus.
Because they are not crown, they are just animals.

>>Because they are not clowns, they are animals.

They have to play in national.

>>They have to do a play in national.
Circus is a human play, not animal.

>>Correct.

A lot of unethical things happen to here.

>>A lot of unethical things happen there.

Compulsory pregnancy, abuse, etc, all the bad things is happening here.

>>Bad things happen there such as compulsory pregnancy, abuse, etc.

So I don’t like to see animals in circus.

>>Correct.

파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.

다른 영어첨삭교정 보기

영어첨삭교정 ·