4.4 homework
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It is not good for animals in circus.
>>It is not good for animals to be in a circus.
Because they are not crown, they are just animals.
>>Because they are not clowns, they are animals.
They have to play in national.
>>They have to do a play in national.
Circus is a human play, not animal.
>>Correct.
A lot of unethical things happen to here.
>>A lot of unethical things happen there.
Compulsory pregnancy, abuse, etc, all the bad things is happening here.
>>Bad things happen there such as compulsory pregnancy, abuse, etc.
So I don’t like to see animals in circus.
>>Correct.
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