4.4 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi ma'am! Good morning? Today is burning Friday. I hope that you will have a nice weekend.
Homework
Last October we (had swum) in the lagoon,out where the old freighter had (sunk). We (rode) our bikes to the park and Bobby (led) us to Bristle Cove where we (were diving) off the rocks into the cold water. It (was) late in the season, but the water had not (flozen) and we (had worn) wetsuits.
Thank you!
강사 첨삭
Good morning Mr. [이름]! I hope that you will also have a great time with your family this weekend. Anyway, kindly go over my corrections please. Take care!
~KELLY~
Hi ma\'am! Good morning? Today is burning Friday. I hope that you will have a nice weekend.>> Correct!HomeworkLast October we (had swum) in the lagoon,out where the old freighter had (sunk).
>> swum// Correct.
We (rode) our bikes to the park and Bobby (led) us to Bristle Cove where we (were diving) off the rocks into the cold water.
>> Correct // Correct // dived/dove
It (was) late in the season, but the water had not (frozen) and we (had worn) wetsuits.
>> Correct // Correct // woreThank you!
>> Correct!
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