4-41th Homework

Hi, [이름]! ^_^

How are you doing today?

The typhoon has gone out of my country and it\'s really sunny now. ^_^

I agree that knowing how to speak a foreign language that is widely spoken across the globe is indeed a valuable skill.

This is because you can communicate with people wherever you are and wherever you go.

I know it\'s tough but it\'s worth it. :)
I hope you\'re doing great.

See you tomorrow.

~Teacher C[이름]

The foreign language is very attractive in the global era.

>> A foreign language is very attractive in the global era.
An airplane can take me anywhere if I want.

>> An airplane can take me anywhere I want to go.
Moreover, if we can fluently speak the language of the nation that we arrive at, it would be better.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> Moreover, if we can fluently speak the language of the nation that we arrive at, it would be to our advantage.
And the language skill is a very good weapon to get something in the world.

>> The skill in language is a very good weapon to get something in the world.
If I can speak the foreign language well, I think the fear that I have vaguely might disappear.

>> If I can speak a foreign language well, I think the fear that I vaguely have might disappear.
In Korea, speaking English is a symbol that I can show my superiority to others.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> In Korea, I can show my superiority to others by speaking the English language well.
I had also thought the speaking English like that.

>> I had also thought of speaking English that way.
However, I have changed it as the speaking English is not a superiority but a just skill.

>> However, I have changed my opinion about it because speaking English is not a sign superiority but just a skill.
If I have some skill, It would be convenient.

>> If I have some skills, it would be convenient.
Of course, if I have more skill than others, it would also be good since I might get a chance when I try to do something.

>> Of course, if I have more skills than others, it would also be good since I might get a chance when I try to do something.
Though the speaking English is a skill, it is very useful and it can make me see another world that I don\'t live in.

>> Though speaking English is a skill, it is very useful and it can make me see another world that I don\'t live in.
So I want to use my English skill in the world if I have a chance.

>> So, I want to use my English skill if I have a chance.
However, the road is very tough.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> However, it is a very tough road.