4-42th Homewokr

Hello, [이름]!

Thank you for this wonderful essay.

I find it really enlightening.

I believe that having a plan for your future is very important.

It normal to be stressed and it\'s normal to feel afraid but your dream should be bigger than all of these.

Keep moving forward.

You can do it!

I\'ll see you tomorrow. ^_^

~Teacher C[이름]

Do you have any plan for your future?

>> CORRECT!

OR >> Do you have a plan for your future?
What are you doing now for your future?

>> CORRECT!

OR >> What are you currently doing for your future?
When I was glowing up, I heard it so many times.

>> When I was growing up, I\'ve heard of it so many times.
I had a dream when I was young, I wanted to be an engineer.

>> I had a dream when I was young. I wanted to be an engineer.
But I din\'t think about the next after being the engineer.

>> But I didn\'t think about the next step after being an engineer.
If I think about my dream now, it would be very vague.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> It would be very vague if I think about my dream now.

Nobody said to me about the plan or the road to achieve my dream.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> Nobody told me about the plan or the road to achieve my dream.
I just planed by myself, and I just did something that I had considered.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> I just planed alone and I just did something that I had considered.
Therefore, there was a lot of errors to do something.

>> Therefore, there were a lot of errors when I did something.
And now I often make an error on my project or on my job.

>> And now, I often make an error on my project or on my job.
Sometimes, I recognize me that don\'t know about some terms relating my job.

>> Sometimes, I recognize that don\'t know about some terms related to my job.
Whenever it comes to me, it makes me frighten.

>> Whenever it comes to me, I get frightened.
It is also very stressful to me, sometimes.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> It is also sometimes very stressful to me.
But it is also an energy that makes for me to keep going on my job without any abandon.

>> But it is also an energy that makes me keep going on my job without abandoning it.
I have a dream that is to live in my home without any stress.

>> I have a dream to live in my home without any stress.
If I thought about me, I\'m very not tolerant about the stress.

>> If I thought about me, I\'m not very tolerant with stress.
When I get the extreme stress, I don\'t do anything.

>> When I get extreme stress, I don\'t do anything.