4-43th Homework

Hello there, [이름]!   

Thank you for doing your best to write an essay.

I absolutely think practice helps us get better no matter what we intend to do.

It is a form of preparation for us when we attempt to do something big.

Anyhow, don\'t get tired of practicing.

You\'re half-way there. :)
See you tomorrow.

~Teacher C[이름]

The repeat may be a big challenge for one to do well.

>> Repeating something may be a big challenge for one to do well.
I think the repeat is to practice something in order to do well without any problem.

>> I think repetition is practicing in order to do something well without any problem.
There are so many workers in the working area, for example, construction site, factory and farm.

>> There are so many workers in the working area like for example a construction site, a factory and a farm.
No one do well since first.

>> No one does well at first.
They repeat their task over and over, even if they want to stop it.

>> They repeat their task over and over even if they want to stop it.
That\'s why that were their task that they had to do well.

>> [Do you mean]: That\'s why they do their task well. 

I think it is real pro.

>> I think that is what a real pro is.
When we have to solve a problem, we face so many obstacles.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> When we need to solve a problem, we face so many obstacles.
At that time, many people don\'t give up, it\'s because they are not amateurs.

>> At that time, many people don\'t give up because they are not amateurs.
I admire them no matter what they do.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> I admire them for whatever they do.
I always learn from their attitude not giving up.

>> I always learn from their attitude of not giving up.
We want to give up whenever we meet the problems that is even very difficult to solve.

>> We want to give up whenever we meet the problems that are even very difficult to solve.
Whenever we meet the problem, we have to decide its status as fast as possible.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> Whenever we meet the problem, we need to decide its status as soon as possible.
There would be an impossible thing to solve alone, so we have to appreciate it whether it could be solved alone or not.

>> [Do you mean]: There is something that is impossible to solve alone so we have to appreciate it whether it is solved or not.
Of course, it is also a very tough thing but we have to do.

>> Of course, it is also a very tough thing but we have to do it.