4-44th Homework
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It's a sunny day, which is the typical fall of Korea.
The high and blue sky are the symbol of the fall of Korea.
Generally, we could the typical fall of Korea at the late September.
However, in this year we can feel it faster than the previous years.
So, I could not see the mosquitoes around me this year.
In the rainy season, there were not so much rain and the temperature was not higher that we expected previously.
After finishing rainy season, there were the scorching days but it was not long.
When I was growing up, in my surrounding I could easily see the mosquitoes everywhere.
The place where they lived a lot was the bamboo's forest.
Sometimes, we needed to cross the forest when we played with the friends.
The mosquitoes that were starving at the blood had a feast when we went cross the forest.
Nowadays, I didn't have a chance to go the bamboo's forest and moreover the environment that the mosquitoes could spawn also was not made.
Anyway, the climate change is in front of us.
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]! :)
Thank you for taking the time to write an essay.
How was you weekend, by the way?
I hope you had a great one.
I envy your good weather.
I wish it\'s not so rainy out here. kkk.
I also hate mosquitoes but we have a lot of them out here.
They\'re scary.
Keeping the environment clean is the best way to drive them away.
I hope you\'re doing great.
Enjoy the good weather. ^_^
~Teacher C[이름]
It\'s a sunny day, which is the typical fall of Korea.
>> It\'s a sunny day which is a typical fall weather in Korea
The high and blue sky are the symbol of the fall of Korea.
>> The high and blue sky are the symbols of the fall of Korea.
Generally, we could the typical fall of Korea at the late September.
>> Generally, we could feel the typical fall weather in Korea in the late weeks of September
However, in this year we can feel it faster than the previous years.
>> However, we can feel it earlier this year than in the previous years.
So, I could not see the mosquitoes around me this year.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> So, the mosquitoes are not around this year.
In the rainy season, there were not so much rain and the temperature was not higher that we expected previously.
>> In the rainy season, there were not much rain and the temperature was not as high as we have previously expected.
After finishing rainy season, there were the scorching days but it was not long.
>> After the rainy season, there were scorching days but it was not long.
When I was growing up, in my surrounding I could easily see the mosquitoes everywhere.
>> When I was growing up, I could easily see the mosquitoes everywhere in my surroundings.
The place where they lived a lot was the bamboo\'s forest
>> The place where they lived a lot was the bamboo forest.
Sometimes, we needed to cross the forest when we played with the friends.
>> Sometimes, we needed to cross the forest when we played with our friends.
The mosquitoes that were starving at the blood had a feast when we went cross the forest.
>> The mosquitoes that were starving for blood had a feast when we went cross the forest.
Nowadays, I didn\'t have a chance to go the bamboo\'s forest and moreover the environment that the mosquitoes could spawn also was not made.
>> Nowadays, I didn\'t have a chance to go to the bamboo forest and moreover, the environment that the mosquitoes could spawn on was also not made.
Anyway, the climate change is in front of us.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> Anyway, the climate change is ahead of us.
Thank you for taking the time to write an essay.
How was you weekend, by the way?
I hope you had a great one.
I envy your good weather.
I wish it\'s not so rainy out here. kkk.
I also hate mosquitoes but we have a lot of them out here.
They\'re scary.
Keeping the environment clean is the best way to drive them away.
I hope you\'re doing great.
Enjoy the good weather. ^_^
~Teacher C[이름]
It\'s a sunny day, which is the typical fall of Korea.
>> It\'s a sunny day which is a typical fall weather in Korea
The high and blue sky are the symbol of the fall of Korea.
>> The high and blue sky are the symbols of the fall of Korea.
Generally, we could the typical fall of Korea at the late September.
>> Generally, we could feel the typical fall weather in Korea in the late weeks of September
However, in this year we can feel it faster than the previous years.
>> However, we can feel it earlier this year than in the previous years.
So, I could not see the mosquitoes around me this year.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> So, the mosquitoes are not around this year.
In the rainy season, there were not so much rain and the temperature was not higher that we expected previously.
>> In the rainy season, there were not much rain and the temperature was not as high as we have previously expected.
After finishing rainy season, there were the scorching days but it was not long.
>> After the rainy season, there were scorching days but it was not long.
When I was growing up, in my surrounding I could easily see the mosquitoes everywhere.
>> When I was growing up, I could easily see the mosquitoes everywhere in my surroundings.
The place where they lived a lot was the bamboo\'s forest
>> The place where they lived a lot was the bamboo forest.
Sometimes, we needed to cross the forest when we played with the friends.
>> Sometimes, we needed to cross the forest when we played with our friends.
The mosquitoes that were starving at the blood had a feast when we went cross the forest.
>> The mosquitoes that were starving for blood had a feast when we went cross the forest.
Nowadays, I didn\'t have a chance to go the bamboo\'s forest and moreover the environment that the mosquitoes could spawn also was not made.
>> Nowadays, I didn\'t have a chance to go to the bamboo forest and moreover, the environment that the mosquitoes could spawn on was also not made.
Anyway, the climate change is in front of us.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> Anyway, the climate change is ahead of us.
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