4-46th Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
In Korea, the reality shows in the TV are very popular.
The reality shows are very rare and very strange to Korean many years ago.
The popular show at that time was a standing comedy show.
When I was growing up, there was a comedy show that was very funny.
Unfortunately, the place where I lived in was a shadow area.
So, I couldn't clearly see the show at that time.
Whenever the show was aired, we had to change the direction of the antenna in order to catch the broadcasting signals.
Nonetheless, the screen was always bleary.
If it rained, its status would be deteriorated.
We could see the clean TV screen after building the big relay station on the mountain near by our area.
Before building the relay station, if we want to see the funny shows, like a comedy show, an animation, we must go to my friend's house.
Especially, there were so many programs that we wanted to see on Saturday's afternoon.
At that time, we were also go to school on Saturday.
강사 첨삭
Hello there [이름]! :)
Thank you for writing an essay.
You\'ve created good sentences. Carry on!
Comedy shows are popular in my country nowadays.
It\'s a very good stress reliever.
I hope you\'re having a great day.
See you tomorrow.
~Teacher C[이름]
In Korea, the reality shows in the TV are very popular.
>> In Korea, the reality shows on TV are very popular.
The reality shows are very rare and very strange to Korean many years ago.
>> The reality shows were very rare and very strange to Korean many years ago.
The popular show at that time was a standing comedy show.
>> The popular show at that time was a stand-up comedy show.
When I was growing up, there was a comedy show that was very funny.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> When I young, there was a comedy show that was very funny.
Unfortunately, the place where I lived in was a shadow area.
>> [Do you mean]: Unfortunately, the place where I lived in was a rural area.
So, I couldn\'t clearly see the show at that time.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> So, I couldn\'t clearly watch the show at that time.
Whenever the show was aired, we had to change the direction of the antenna in order to catch the broadcasting signals.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> Whenever the show was aired, we had to change the direction of the antenna in order to get some broadcasting signals.
Nonetheless, the screen was always bleary.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> However, the screen was always blurred..
If it rained, its status would be deteriorated.
>> If it rained, its status deteriorated.
We could see the clean TV screen after building the big relay station on the mountain near by our area.
>> [Do you mean]: We now have a clear TV signal after a big relay station on the mountain near by our area was built.
Before building the relay station, if we want to see the funny shows, like a comedy show, an animation, we must go to my friend\'s house.
>> Before the relay station was built, if we want to see the funny shows, like a comedy show or an animation, we must go to my friend\'s house.
Especially, there were so many programs that we wanted to see on Saturday\'s afternoon.
>> There were especially so many programs that we wanted to see on Saturday afternoons.
At that time, we were also go to school on Saturday.
>> At that time, we also went to school on Saturdays.
Thank you for writing an essay.
You\'ve created good sentences. Carry on!
Comedy shows are popular in my country nowadays.
It\'s a very good stress reliever.
I hope you\'re having a great day.
See you tomorrow.
~Teacher C[이름]
In Korea, the reality shows in the TV are very popular.
>> In Korea, the reality shows on TV are very popular.
The reality shows are very rare and very strange to Korean many years ago.
>> The reality shows were very rare and very strange to Korean many years ago.
The popular show at that time was a standing comedy show.
>> The popular show at that time was a stand-up comedy show.
When I was growing up, there was a comedy show that was very funny.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> When I young, there was a comedy show that was very funny.
Unfortunately, the place where I lived in was a shadow area.
>> [Do you mean]: Unfortunately, the place where I lived in was a rural area.
So, I couldn\'t clearly see the show at that time.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> So, I couldn\'t clearly watch the show at that time.
Whenever the show was aired, we had to change the direction of the antenna in order to catch the broadcasting signals.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> Whenever the show was aired, we had to change the direction of the antenna in order to get some broadcasting signals.
Nonetheless, the screen was always bleary.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> However, the screen was always blurred..
If it rained, its status would be deteriorated.
>> If it rained, its status deteriorated.
We could see the clean TV screen after building the big relay station on the mountain near by our area.
>> [Do you mean]: We now have a clear TV signal after a big relay station on the mountain near by our area was built.
Before building the relay station, if we want to see the funny shows, like a comedy show, an animation, we must go to my friend\'s house.
>> Before the relay station was built, if we want to see the funny shows, like a comedy show or an animation, we must go to my friend\'s house.
Especially, there were so many programs that we wanted to see on Saturday\'s afternoon.
>> There were especially so many programs that we wanted to see on Saturday afternoons.
At that time, we were also go to school on Saturday.
>> At that time, we also went to school on Saturdays.
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