4-47th Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
What do you think about your life now?
Do you think that you are now enjoying your life without any regret?
Today, I thought about my life at the moment.
I have lived for a long time as myself and I have to live along with myself and my family.
Sometimes, someone ask me that do you live for working or do you work for living.
At that time, I could not easily answer about that.
If I want to live conveniently, I would need some money even if it is not enough.
If I want to earn some money, I have to work for my life.
Basically, I think the question is wrong.
After being born, we have to live until our life pass away.
So, to live in the society, we would need several things and even the money.
I think no matter the sequence is not important.
We have to do both to survive in my life.
But if we just focus on the survival, there is no delight in our life.
Sometimes, we need to present something to us.
Life is very short, and we need to wallow in delight sometimes without anxiety.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]! :)
Thank you for taking the time to write this essay.
You\'re right. Money is not the most important thing in this world but it is necessary to live a comfortable life.
I hope you will achieve what you\'re aiming for in life.
Keep fighting and keep moving forward.
You can do it! Ajah! ^^
~Teacher C[이름]
What do you think about your life now?
>> CORRECT!
OR >> What is your opinion about your life now?
Do you think that you are now enjoying your life without any regret?
>> CORRECT!
OR >> Are you enjoying life without any regret?
Today, I thought about my life at the moment.
>> Today, I thought about my current life.
I have lived for a long time as myself and I have to live along with myself and my family.
>> I have lived for a long time and I have to live along with myself and my family.
Sometimes, someone ask me that do you live for working or do you work for living.
>> [Do you mean]: Sometimes, someone asks me what I do for a living.
At that time, I could not easily answer about that.
>> At that time, I could not easily answer about that question.
If I want to live conveniently, I would need some money even if it is not enough.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> If I want to live conveniently, I would need to earn more money.
If I want to earn some money, I have to work for my life.
>> If I want to earn some money, I have to work all my life.
Basically, I think the question is wrong.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> I basically think the question is wrong.
After being born, we have to live until our life pass away.
>> After being born, we have to live until our life passes away.
So, to live in the society, we would need several things and even the money.
>> So, to live in the society, we would need several things and even money.
I think no matter the sequence is not important.
>> I think the sequence is not important.
We have to do both to survive in my life.
>> We have to do both to survive in life.
But if we just focus on the survival, there is no delight in our life.
>> But if we just focus on surviving, there is no delight in our life.
Sometimes, we need to present something to us.
>> [Do you mean]: Sometimes, we need to give presents to our selves.
Life is very short, and we need to wallow in delight sometimes without anxiety.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> Life is very short, and we need to sometimes enjoy in delight without feeling anxious.
Thank you for taking the time to write this essay.
You\'re right. Money is not the most important thing in this world but it is necessary to live a comfortable life.
I hope you will achieve what you\'re aiming for in life.
Keep fighting and keep moving forward.
You can do it! Ajah! ^^
~Teacher C[이름]
What do you think about your life now?
>> CORRECT!
OR >> What is your opinion about your life now?
Do you think that you are now enjoying your life without any regret?
>> CORRECT!
OR >> Are you enjoying life without any regret?
Today, I thought about my life at the moment.
>> Today, I thought about my current life.
I have lived for a long time as myself and I have to live along with myself and my family.
>> I have lived for a long time and I have to live along with myself and my family.
Sometimes, someone ask me that do you live for working or do you work for living.
>> [Do you mean]: Sometimes, someone asks me what I do for a living.
At that time, I could not easily answer about that.
>> At that time, I could not easily answer about that question.
If I want to live conveniently, I would need some money even if it is not enough.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> If I want to live conveniently, I would need to earn more money.
If I want to earn some money, I have to work for my life.
>> If I want to earn some money, I have to work all my life.
Basically, I think the question is wrong.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> I basically think the question is wrong.
After being born, we have to live until our life pass away.
>> After being born, we have to live until our life passes away.
So, to live in the society, we would need several things and even the money.
>> So, to live in the society, we would need several things and even money.
I think no matter the sequence is not important.
>> I think the sequence is not important.
We have to do both to survive in my life.
>> We have to do both to survive in life.
But if we just focus on the survival, there is no delight in our life.
>> But if we just focus on surviving, there is no delight in our life.
Sometimes, we need to present something to us.
>> [Do you mean]: Sometimes, we need to give presents to our selves.
Life is very short, and we need to wallow in delight sometimes without anxiety.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> Life is very short, and we need to sometimes enjoy in delight without feeling anxious.
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