4-48th Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
This composition is last in the forth class.
At the start of the latest class, I would like to change a teacher.
There was no problem with teacher C[이름].
She is always excited even though it was very early morning in Philippine.
Actually, I would like to take more experience with other teachers.
I know that my english power is poor, but I would like to try a different kind of teacher.
But there was no teachers who could teach me at my class time.
Eventually I couldn't do that.
During the class, I might change my mind or not.
Anyway, this class and this composition are very helpful to me to do something in english.
I wrote the paper to summit the conference from a week ago.
Last year, I also wrote the paper and there were several errors.
Of course, there were also several errors at this time.
But the difference was the error point and the speed of the composition.
After finishing the paper, my colleague who had been in America checked the grammar of the paper.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]! ^_^
A pleasant Monday to you.
Thank you for this composition.
Even if we won\'t be studying together in the future, I hope you would still continue studying English.
I sincerely think you improved a lot.
You might not see it but I do.
You always do your best and you refuse to give up.
Those qualities are very necessary in learning a language.
Stay patient and persevering.
You can do it!
~Teacher C[이름]
This composition is last in the forth class.
>> This composition is the last one for our class.
At the start of the latest class, I would like to change a teacher.
>> When I re-enroll, I would like to change my teacher.
There was no problem with teacher C[이름].
>> CORRECT!
OR >> There\'s nothing wrong with teacher C[이름].
She is always excited even though it was very early morning in Philippine.
>> She is always excited even though it is very early morning in the Philippines.
Actually, I would like to take more experience with other teachers.
>> Actually, I would like to have more experiences with other teachers.
I know that my english power is poor, but I would like to try a different kind of teacher.
>> I know that my English skill is poor but I would like to try a different kind of teacher.
But there was no teachers who could teach me at my class time.
>> But there are no other teachers who could teach me at my class time.
Eventually I couldn\'t do that.
>> Eventually, I couldn\'t do that.
During the class, I might change my mind or not.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> I might change my mind or not during the class.
Anyway, this class and this composition are very helpful to me to do something in english.
>> [Do you mean]: Anyway, this class and this composition are very helpful in improving my English skills.
I wrote the paper to summit the conference from a week ago.
>> I wrote a paper for the summit conference a week ago.
Last year, I also wrote the paper and there were several errors.
>> Last year, I also wrote a paper and there were several errors.
Of course, there were also several errors at this time.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> Of course, this time around, there are still several errors.
But the difference was the error point and the speed of the composition.
>> But the difference was the error point and the speed of writing the composition.
After finishing the paper, my colleague who had been in America checked the grammar of the paper.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> After writing the paper, my colleague who had been in America checked the grammar of the paper.
A pleasant Monday to you.
Thank you for this composition.
Even if we won\'t be studying together in the future, I hope you would still continue studying English.
I sincerely think you improved a lot.
You might not see it but I do.
You always do your best and you refuse to give up.
Those qualities are very necessary in learning a language.
Stay patient and persevering.
You can do it!
~Teacher C[이름]
This composition is last in the forth class.
>> This composition is the last one for our class.
At the start of the latest class, I would like to change a teacher.
>> When I re-enroll, I would like to change my teacher.
There was no problem with teacher C[이름].
>> CORRECT!
OR >> There\'s nothing wrong with teacher C[이름].
She is always excited even though it was very early morning in Philippine.
>> She is always excited even though it is very early morning in the Philippines.
Actually, I would like to take more experience with other teachers.
>> Actually, I would like to have more experiences with other teachers.
I know that my english power is poor, but I would like to try a different kind of teacher.
>> I know that my English skill is poor but I would like to try a different kind of teacher.
But there was no teachers who could teach me at my class time.
>> But there are no other teachers who could teach me at my class time.
Eventually I couldn\'t do that.
>> Eventually, I couldn\'t do that.
During the class, I might change my mind or not.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> I might change my mind or not during the class.
Anyway, this class and this composition are very helpful to me to do something in english.
>> [Do you mean]: Anyway, this class and this composition are very helpful in improving my English skills.
I wrote the paper to summit the conference from a week ago.
>> I wrote a paper for the summit conference a week ago.
Last year, I also wrote the paper and there were several errors.
>> Last year, I also wrote a paper and there were several errors.
Of course, there were also several errors at this time.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> Of course, this time around, there are still several errors.
But the difference was the error point and the speed of the composition.
>> But the difference was the error point and the speed of writing the composition.
After finishing the paper, my colleague who had been in America checked the grammar of the paper.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> After writing the paper, my colleague who had been in America checked the grammar of the paper.
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