4-4th Homework

Hello there [이름]!

Thank you very much for sharing your opinion in our essay question. 

Personally speaking, I prefer the life in the countryside. 

It\'s simple, quiet and has lesser complications. 

In addition to that, the water, air and food are always fresh so what more could I ask for?

I can honestly say that I can survive without malls and movie theaters. :)

I was born and raised in city. 

I spent my entire life living in the city and I don\'t like it. 

If I were given the chance to choose, I will choose the countryside. kkk. 

Anyhow, that\'s my stand in this matter.

I hope you\' re doing great.

See you on Thursday. :)
~Teacher C[이름]

I think it\'s a problem of choice but it\'s not a better choice.

>> [Do you mean]: I think it\'s a problem of choice but choosing one is not a better choice.
Someone wants to live in the quiet city or in the quiet rural.

>> Someone wants to live in the quiet city or in the quiet countryside.

OR >> Some people prefer to live in the quiet urban area or in the quiet rural area.

Many people wants to live in the city even if there are a lot of noise.

>> Many people wants to live in the city even if there are a lot of noises.

OR >> Many people wants to live in the city even if it is very noisy. 

It\'s because they like the convenience in the city, for example, shopping mall, theater, public transportation, etc.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> It\'s because they like the convenience in the city. In the city, they can find shopping malls, theaters, public transportations, etc.
I think these are very noise but they live in the city for the convenience.

>> I think these create a lot of noise but they want to live in the city for the convenience.
However, some others want to live in the quiet city.

>> However, others want to live in the/a quiet city.

OR >> However, some want to live in the/a quiet city.
Even if they are living in the noisy city, they simultaneously want to live in the quiet city.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> Even if they are living in a noisy city, they still wish to live in a quiet city.
I think it\'s because of the same reason, that is, the convenience.

>> I think it\'s because of the same reason and that is, (the) convenience.
People who want to live in the quiet city generally live in the large and expensive house.

>> [Do you mean]: People who want to live in the quiet city generally want to live in a large and expensive house.
People who live in the noisy city also want to do in the quiet place, but they could not afford to buy the expensive and large house.

>> People who live in the/a noisy city also want to stay in a quiet place, but they could not afford to buy an expensive and large house.
In my case, I want to live in the rural without any noise.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> In my case, I want to live in the countryside without any noise.
Noise make me annoyed everyday.

>> Noise makes me annoyed everyday.
Maybe, nobody wants to live in the noisy place.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> Maybe, nobody wants to live in a noisy place.