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The bus station is located next to my apartment.
However when I go to my office, I drive my car because my office is located in the countryside.
It is very convenient and I can arrive at my office fast.
Also I can listen to music when I drive my car and I can save my times.
If I take a bus, I have to stay for 1 hours in the bus.
It is inconvenient.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
You are really getting better everyday. Again, be aware of the difference of \'times\' and \'time\'. And don\'t forget 1 hour.
Teacher Venus^^
The bus station is located next to my apartment.
>>>CORRECT
However when I go to my office, I drive my car because my office is located in the countryside.
>>>CORRECT
It is very convenient and I can arrive at my office fast.>>>CORRECT
Also I can listen to music when I drive my car and I can save my times.
>>>Also I can listen to music when I drive my car and I can save my time.
If I take a bus, I have to stay for 1 hours in the bus.
>>>If I take a bus, I have to stay for 1 hour in the bus.
It is inconvenient.
>>>CORRECT
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