4-5th Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
We could easily learn something when we experienced difficulties.
But it is always not true.
We can often learn something without any intension, but it would be very useful.
Learning and knowing about something is very good to us in order to commit a little mistake.
In many cases, our mistake would be caused by our disinterest or ignorance.
If you want to be less it, you have to learn to keep your mistake.
Even if you learn something to reduce a mistake, there would occur a fault.
I think it is natural until you are familiar with your skill which you learned.
Whenever you try and error, we could easily understand your task.
But you have to overcome other's criticism until you become a handy man.
In our experiences, there would be good or bad things.
To carry out your task, you need to correctly get the experience whether it is yours or not.
In many cases, there are many things that we could not directly experience.
So, if we correctly use it, we can get the knowledge from it.
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]! ^_^
Thanks for writing a nice composition today.
In my opinion, we can both learn from our hardships and triumphs.
Aside from that, aside from our own experiences, we can also learn from others\' experiences.
You don\'t necessarily have to go through something.
Learning from books or other people\'s experiences is already enough.
I also agree that mistakes will keep on repeating if you don\'t learn from them. :)
That\'s my opinion in this matter.
I hope you\'re doing great.
See you tomorrow.
~Teacher C[이름] ^^
We could easily learn something when we experienced difficulties.
> We could easily learn something when we experience difficulties.
But it is always not true.
>> But it is not always true.
We can often learn something without any intension, but it would be very useful.
>> We can often learn something without any intention, but it would be very useful.
Learning and knowing about something is very good to us in order to commit a little mistake.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> Learning and knowing about something is very good for us in order not to commit too many mistakes.
In many cases, our mistake would be caused by our disinterest or ignorance.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> In most instances, our mistakes are caused by our disinterest or ignorance.
If you want to be less it, you have to learn to keep your mistake.
>> [Do you mean]: If you want to lessen it, you have to learn from your mistake.
Even if you learn something to reduce a mistake, there would occur a fault.
>> Even if you learn something to reduce a mistake, a fault could still occur.
I think it is natural until you are familiar with your skill which you learned.
>> CORRECT!
>> I think it is natural until you are familiar with the skill that you\'ve learned.
Whenever you try and error, we could easily understand your task.
>> [Do you mean]: Whenever you do trial and error, you understand your task better.
But you have to overcome other\'s criticism until you become a handy man.
>> But you have to overcome others\' criticism until you become a handy man.
In our experiences, there would be good or bad things.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> There would be good or bad things in our experiences.
To carry out your task, you need to correctly get the experience whether it is yours or not.
>> To carry out your task, you need to correctly learn from the experience whether it is yours or not.
In many cases, there are many things that we could not directly experience.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> In most instances, there are many things that we could not directly experience.
So, if we correctly use it, we can get the knowledge from it.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> So, if we are able to correctly use it, we can attain knowledge from it.
Thanks for writing a nice composition today.
In my opinion, we can both learn from our hardships and triumphs.
Aside from that, aside from our own experiences, we can also learn from others\' experiences.
You don\'t necessarily have to go through something.
Learning from books or other people\'s experiences is already enough.
I also agree that mistakes will keep on repeating if you don\'t learn from them. :)
That\'s my opinion in this matter.
I hope you\'re doing great.
See you tomorrow.
~Teacher C[이름] ^^
We could easily learn something when we experienced difficulties.
> We could easily learn something when we experience difficulties.
But it is always not true.
>> But it is not always true.
We can often learn something without any intension, but it would be very useful.
>> We can often learn something without any intention, but it would be very useful.
Learning and knowing about something is very good to us in order to commit a little mistake.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> Learning and knowing about something is very good for us in order not to commit too many mistakes.
In many cases, our mistake would be caused by our disinterest or ignorance.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> In most instances, our mistakes are caused by our disinterest or ignorance.
If you want to be less it, you have to learn to keep your mistake.
>> [Do you mean]: If you want to lessen it, you have to learn from your mistake.
Even if you learn something to reduce a mistake, there would occur a fault.
>> Even if you learn something to reduce a mistake, a fault could still occur.
I think it is natural until you are familiar with your skill which you learned.
>> CORRECT!
>> I think it is natural until you are familiar with the skill that you\'ve learned.
Whenever you try and error, we could easily understand your task.
>> [Do you mean]: Whenever you do trial and error, you understand your task better.
But you have to overcome other\'s criticism until you become a handy man.
>> But you have to overcome others\' criticism until you become a handy man.
In our experiences, there would be good or bad things.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> There would be good or bad things in our experiences.
To carry out your task, you need to correctly get the experience whether it is yours or not.
>> To carry out your task, you need to correctly learn from the experience whether it is yours or not.
In many cases, there are many things that we could not directly experience.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> In most instances, there are many things that we could not directly experience.
So, if we correctly use it, we can get the knowledge from it.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> So, if we are able to correctly use it, we can attain knowledge from it.
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.