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학생이 쓴 원문
Before I was married, my boyfriend and I visited Gangwon-do Province which was very quite and nice place.
There were white beach and train station.
This place was very famous place in Korea because of TV show.
Anyway, the end of the year we visited there and it was snowing.
When we arrived at 강원도, my boyfriend said can you marry me?
I answered yes.
I can't forget it.
My boyfriend became my husband.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
You did your homework very well. Remember to put an article before a noun. But if you use an adjective, there\'s no need for an article.
examples:
It was very quite. OR It was a very quite place.
This place was very famous. OR This is a very famous place.
Teacher Venus^^
Before I was married, my boyfriend and I visited 강원도 which was very quite and nice place.
>>>Before getting married, my boyfriend and I visited 강원도 which was very quite and nice.
There were white beach and train station.
>>>CORRECT
This place was very famous place in Korea because of TV show.
>>>This place was very famous in Korea because of a TV show.
Anyway, the end of the year we visited there and it was snowing.
>>>Anyway, at the end of the year we visited there and it was snowing.
When we arrived at 강원도, my boyfriend said can you marry me?
>>>When we arrived at 강원도, my boyfriend said, \"Can you marry me?\"
I answered yes.
>>>CORRECTI can\'t forget it.
>>>CORRECTMy boyfriend became my husband.
>>>CORRECT
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