4.6 Homework

2015-04-06 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi there! Good morning! It sure is raining hard here in Changwon. Are there any serious damages from typhoon in your country? I hope that everything will be okay. 1) If I study, I will pass the exams. 2) If the sun shine, we will walk to the town. 3) If he has a high temperature, he will see a doctor. 4) If my friends come, I will be very happy. 5) If she earn a lot of money, she fly to New York. Thank you!

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Mr. [이름]! Thank you for your homework today. Please go over my corrections. Anyway, thank you for your concern. We are fortunate because there are no damages from the typhoon. Take care and have a great day. ~Kelly^^ Hi there! Good morning! It sure is raining hard here in Changwon. >> Correct. Are there any serious damages from typhoon in your country? >> Are there any serious damages from the typhoon in your country? I hope that everything will be okay. >> Correct.1) If I study, I will pass the exams. >> Correct.2) If the sun shine, we will walk to the town. >> If the sun shines, we will walk to the town.3) If he has a high temperature, he will see a doctor. >> Correct.4) If my friends come, I will be very happy. >> Correct.5) If she earn a lot of money, she fly to New York.>> If she earns a lot of money, she will fly to New York.Thank you! >> Correct.

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