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2018-04-06 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

학생이 쓴 원문

[How did that failure affect me when I failed at something] When I prepared my Ph.D dissertation 2 years ago, I applied my resume to many university to get postdoctoral fellow position. I failed so many times, some people rejected kindly, but some people didn't send me any reply. I got nervous day by day, but I never gave up. I believe I will get the new job. So, I advertised me to so many researcher people who I met every time. One foreign professor introduced me one researcher who I didn't know him. Finally, after then, I went to Japan and worked two years. I think most important thing to live is positive insight and self confidence. Every cloud has a silver lining.

강사 첨삭

You are very lucky to meet such people [이름]!

And I respect you for not giving up.

Thanks for sending this. See you on Monday.

~Teacher Shanee^^,


[How did that failure affect me when I failed at something]

When I prepared my Ph.D dissertation 2 years ago, I applied my resume to many university to get postdoctoral fellow position.

>>> When I was preparing for my Ph.D dissertation two years ago, I submitted my resume to many university to get a post doctoral position.  
 I failed so many times, some people rejected kindly, but some people didn\'t send me any reply. 

>>> I failed so many times. Some people rejected my application kindly but some people didn\'t even send me a reply.
 I got nervous day by day, but I never gave up.

>>> Correct!
 I believe I will get the new job. 

>>> I believed I will get a new job.
So, I advertised me to so many researcher people who I met every time.

>>> So, I tried to sell / promote / market myself to every researcher I met.
 One foreign professor introduced me one researcher who I didn\'t know him.

>>> One foreign professor introduced me to one researcher whom I didn\'t know.
 Finally, after then, I went to Japan and worked two years. 

>>> Finally, after then, I went to Japan and worked there for two years.
 I think most important thing to live is positive insight and self confidence.
Every cloud has a silver lining.

>>> I think most important things to have are positive insight and self confidence. Every cloud has a silver lining.

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