4/6 homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
You are very lucky to meet such people [이름]!
And I respect you for not giving up.
Thanks for sending this. See you on Monday.
~Teacher Shanee^^,
[How did that failure affect me when I failed at something]
When I prepared my Ph.D dissertation 2 years ago, I applied my resume to many university to get postdoctoral fellow position.
>>> When I was preparing for my Ph.D dissertation two years ago, I submitted my resume to many university to get a post doctoral position.
I failed so many times, some people rejected kindly, but some people didn\'t send me any reply.
>>> I failed so many times. Some people rejected my application kindly but some people didn\'t even send me a reply.
I got nervous day by day, but I never gave up.
>>> Correct!
I believe I will get the new job.
>>> I believed I will get a new job.
So, I advertised me to so many researcher people who I met every time.
>>> So, I tried to sell / promote / market myself to every researcher I met.
One foreign professor introduced me one researcher who I didn\'t know him.
>>> One foreign professor introduced me to one researcher whom I didn\'t know.
Finally, after then, I went to Japan and worked two years.
>>> Finally, after then, I went to Japan and worked there for two years.
I think most important thing to live is positive insight and self confidence.
Every cloud has a silver lining.
>>> I think most important things to have are positive insight and self confidence. Every cloud has a silver lining.
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