4. 6 Homework

2018-04-11 · 첨삭 강사 Blair

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If you were making a movie about your life, which actor/actress would play the part of you? Why did you choose this person? I want to choose Mun Chae-won as a major actress. Because I'm her fan. Her face is my type: I want to be similar with her image. Also, her acting ability is awesome. Over 3 times, I saw the KBS drama "The Princess’ Man" in that Mun Chae-won is a major actress. My life... I think my life is not so dynamic. But her charming acting ability will make the contents interesting, I believe.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! See you on Friday, thanks for doing your homework.

- Blair

I want to choose Mun Chae-won as a major actress. Because I\'m her fan. Her face is my type: I want to be similar with her image. Also, her acting ability is awesome. Over 3 times, I saw the KBS drama \"The Princess’ Man\" in that Mun Chae-won is a major actress. My life... I think my life is not so dynamic. But her charming acting ability will make the contents interesting, I believe.

I want to choose Mun Chae won/ I want Mun Chae - won as a major actress because I am her fan. I like her face and I want to be similar to her, I also like her acting skills and I find it awesome. Over 3 times, I saw the KBS drama \"The Princess’ Man\" in that Mun Chae-won is a major actress. My life... I think my life is not so dynamic. But her charming acting ability will make the contents interesting, I believe.

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