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2018-04-09 · 첨삭 강사 Vitti

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Question)Are you a risk taker? Why/why not? Ansewer) I\'m risk taker. Because I worked company 10 years but I do challenged another things. It was another jobs. My challenge of things is florist and painter. I had to achive constantly practice 4 years. So I grew up the florist and painter. I have flower brend that it name is the Vueblanc. And I am kfaa artist.(korea fine Art Association) The result, My thought risk taker is very important in my life and If you anyone challenge it is another life start.

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That bouquet is as beautiful as you.

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Question:

Are you a risk taker? Why/why not?

Answer)
I\'m risk taker. Because I worked company 10 years but I do challenged another things.
It was another jobs. My challenge of things is florist and painter.
I had to achive constantly practice 4 years. So I grew up the florist and painter.
I have flower brend that it name is the Vueblanc. And I am kfaa artist.(korea fine Art Association)
The result, My thought risk taker is very important in my life and If you anyone challenge it is another life start.

Yes, I\'m a risk taker. I worked in a company for 10 years but I changed my job and choose to be a florist and a painter at the same time. I faced many challenges in switching jobs. I practiced for 4 years until I master that field. Now, I have a flower shop named \"Vueblanc\". I am also a member of KFAA (Korea Fine Arts Association). I already take the risk to have a better future and able to face the challenges along the way.

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